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intezaar unka,intezaar e ghazal
Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 8:40 am
by Mahtab Qadr
intezaar unka,intezaar e ghazal
raah takna hai,rahguzaar e ghazal
jab se baad e naseem e deed mili
dil bhi apna huva hai daar e ghazal
misl e mahtaab unki khaamooshi
guftagu unki aabshaar e ghazal
mujh maiN taab e sukhan kahaN itni
maiN huva kitna sharmsaar e ghazal
vo saraapa ghazal sahi par, hai
apne hathoN mai iqtedaar e ghazal
shukria
Mahtab Qadr
Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 12:13 pm
by najma
waaah
vo saraapa ghazal sahi par, hai
apne hathoN mai iqtedaar e ghazal
bohat khoob janab mahtab qadr sahib
daad qubool kijiye
bohat khoob
Bahut khoob
Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 5:50 pm
by Abdullah Nazir
Janab Mahtaab Saahib,
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
waah aap ne tou kamal hii kardiyaa. Bahut jald hii aap ne ghazal mukammal karli aur bhii muraSSaA ashAar ke saath. Saare ke saare ashAar bahut pasand aaye.
Meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool famraayiye.
Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
shukria
Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 6:29 am
by Mahtab Qadr
Inayat hai Najma sahiba aap ki ,daad hausle barhaati hai. shukria
bahut bahut
Mahtab Qadr
najma wrote:waaah
vo saraapa ghazal sahi par, hai
apne hathoN mai iqtedaar e ghazal
bohat khoob janab mahtab qadr sahib
daad qubool kijiye
bohat khoob
Re: Bahut khoob
Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 6:32 am
by Mahtab Qadr
Abdullah bhia Nawazish ke aapne apne kamaal e shafqat se in chand bemaya misroNko sharaf e qubooliat baksha.
shukria
Mahtab Qadr
WEBMASTER wrote:
Janab Mahtaab Saahib,
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
waah aap ne tou kamal hii kardiyaa. Bahut jald hii aap ne ghazal mukammal karli aur bhii muraSSaA ashAar ke saath. Saare ke saare ashAar bahut pasand aaye.
Meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool famraayiye.
Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
Re: shukria
Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 9:04 am
by najma
Mahtab Qadr wrote:Inayat hai Najma sahiba aap ki ,daad hausle barhaati hai. shukria
bahut bahut
Mahtab Qadr
najma wrote:waaah
vo saraapa ghazal sahi par, hai
apne hathoN mai iqtedaar e ghazal
bohat khoob janab mahtab qadr sahib
daad qubool kijiye
bohat khoob
mahtabqadr sahib!
aadaab
aap ne durust farmaya.shair ki hausla afzaee karni hi chahiye.
najma
Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 9:59 am
by Mahtab Qadr
shukria Mukarrar :)
Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 6:43 am
by Mahtab Qadr
sara ji
misl e mahtaab unki khamooshi
guftagu unki aabshaar e ghazal
agar isay maqta tasawwur karlia jaaye to kaisa rahega :)
shukria
Mahtab Qadr
Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 8:25 am
by Mahtab Qadr
ji sahi bilkul sahi kaha aapne ,maqta ghazal ka akhri sher hona chahiye kioNke maqta ke maane khatm karne wala ya aakhri ya muqata karne waala hi hai. laikin aajkal log aksar shora maqta ko nazarandaz kardete haiN yani sare se hota hi nahi maqta yani takhallus wala sher.
shukria
Mahtab Qadr
Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 8:28 am
by Mahtab Qadr
aur haN maqta mai Mahtab ke m ko capitalize karne wali baat ,
dar asl takhallus ka zumaana istemal maqte ko ziada khoobsurat bana dete hai. islye uski zaroorat nahi maslan agar aap apni ghazal mai yoN kahieN
"ham se saara jahaan dekh lia"
saara aap ka takhallus bhi hai aur yahaN maanwi aitebar se bhi istemal ho gaya. theek hai na!
SHUKRIA
Mahtab Qadr