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Taazah ghazal. Irfan Barabankwi, Jeddah
Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 1:11 pm
by irfan barabankwi
Aadaab o Tasleemaat,
Jeddah meiN aik yeh bhi Tarahi misraA diyaa gayaa thaa Ahmad Nadeem qaasimi kaa:
"maiN faqaT aik hii tasweer kahaaN tak dekhooN"
Mujhe ghalaT fehmi hougaiee thii aur maiN ne samjhaa ke qaafiye (tehreer, taqdeer, ta'seer,) waghairah heiN. Ghazal mukammal karne ke bad patah chalaa ke qaafiye (jahaaN, makaaN, jinaaN,) waghairah heiN.
Ab yeh ghazal aapki khidmat meiN haazir hei. Ummeed ke aapki giraNqadr aaraa se mustafeed houne kaa mauqaA milegaa.
Khair Andesh,
Irfan.
Re: Taazah ghazal. Irfan Barabankwi, Jeddah
Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 2:11 pm
by Mahtab Qadr
irfan barabankwi wrote:
Aadaab o Tasleemaat,
Jeddah meiN aik yeh bhi Tarahi misraA diyaa gayaa thaa Ahmad Nadeem qaasimi kaa:
"maiN faqaT aik hii tasweer kahaaN tak dekhooN"
Mujhe ghalaT fehmi hougaiee thii aur maiN ne samjhaa ke qaafiye (tehreer, taqdeer, ta'seer,) waghairah heiN. Ghazal mukammal karne ke bad patah chalaa ke qaafiye (jahaaN, makaaN, jinaaN,) waghairah heiN.
Ab yeh ghazal aapki khidmat meiN haazir hei. Ummeed ke aapki giraNqadr aaraa se mustafeed houne kaa mauqaA milegaa.
Khair Andesh,
Irfan.
Irfaan sahib pahle to aapko khushaamdeed is khoobsurat bazm mai.
aur aap ki ghazal ki daad ke behad rawaN aur khoobsurat murassa ghazal hai. balke aajkal to bahut se diloN ki awaz bhi yahi hai.
shukria
Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 11:18 pm
by Hashmat Usmani
moHtaram janaab-e-Irfaan saaHib,
salaam,
ummeed hai ki mizaaj-e-giraamii ba_Khair hoNge.
aapkii Ghazal paRhi aur be-inteha lutf_andoz huye. bahot zabardast kalaam hai aapkaa. bahot KHoob-soorat. ek intehaaii dil_aavez Ghazal kii taKhleeq par dili mubaakbaad aur daad Haazir-e-Khidmat hai, gar qubool uftaad.
faqat Khaadim,
Hashmat
bahut bahut shukriyah
Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2005 12:28 pm
by irfan barabankwi
mohtaramee
MEHTAB QADR SAAHIB
salam alaikum
lijye saahib hum aapki bazm meiN aadhamke. khushamadeed ka bahut bahut shukriyah. bazm ki shuruAat per meri dili mubarakbad qubool kareiN. ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka aur meri hauslah afzayi ka bhi bahut bahut shukriyah. ummeed hai ke aap apni giraNqadr aara se nawazte raheiNge.
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
bahut bahut shukriyah
Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2005 12:34 pm
by irfan barabankwi
mohtaram janab
HASHMAT USMANI SAAHIB
salam alaikum
urdubandhan meiN meri pehli ghazal ki jo hauslah afzayi aap sab ne ki hai uska bahut bahut shukriyah. ummeed hai ke ayenda bhi aap apney qeemti mashwiroN aur giraNqadr raye se nawazte raheiNge.
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
bahut bahut shukriyah
Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2005 12:43 pm
by irfan barabankwi
mohtaramah
SAARA SAAHIBAH
pukhuloos tasleemat
sab se pehle tau aapko urdubandhan ki bahut kamyab shuruAat per mubarakbad pesh karta hooN uske baad ghazal ki pazeerai ke lkye aapka behud mamnoon -o- shukr guzar hooN. ummeed hai ke aap ayenda bhi mera hauslah baRhati raheiNgi. meri masroofiat ko dekhte hoye khat ke jawabaat aur ghazal ke tabsiroN meiN takheer ko ummedd hai ke aap muAaf framati raheiNgi. shukriyah
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
Re: Taazah ghazal. Irfan Barabankwi, Jeddah
Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2005 1:58 pm
by tahira Masood
irfan barabankwi wrote:
Aadaab o Tasleemaat,
Jeddah meiN aik yeh bhi Tarahi misraA diyaa gayaa thaa Ahmad Nadeem qaasimi kaa:
"maiN faqaT aik hii tasweer kahaaN tak dekhooN"
Mujhe ghalaT fehmi hougaiee thii aur maiN ne samjhaa ke qaafiye (tehreer, taqdeer, ta'seer,) waghairah heiN. Ghazal mukammal karne ke bad patah chalaa ke qaafiye (jahaaN, makaaN, jinaaN,) waghairah heiN.
Ab yeh ghazal aapki khidmat meiN haazir hei. Ummeed ke aapki giraNqadr aaraa se mustafeed houne kaa mauqaA milegaa.
Khair Andesh,
Irfan.
Mukarrami
tasleemaat
wah janaab Maashallah kayaa husne-e-takhyyul hai. aur bohat khoob mazaameen baaNdhe haiN.
daad qabuul fermaaeiN.
wassalam
bahut bahut shukriyah
Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2005 11:50 am
by irfan barabankwi
mohtaramah
TAHIRA MASOOD SAAHIBAH
purkhuloos taslimat
aaj abht dino ke baad jab internet per aana hoa to aapka yeh tabsirah nazar nawaz hua. ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka bahut bahut shukriyah.
jawab ki takheer ke liye mAzarat chahta hooN. ummeed hai ke aap ayendah bhi meri hauslah afzayi karti raheiNgi. shukriyah
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 6:34 pm
by fatimah
aslaam_u_alikam
irfan sahib aap ki yeh gazal bohat achi lagii.
puri gazal hi khub hey.
daad qubool kijiye.
shukriya
Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2005 8:38 pm
by irfan abid
Irfan Sb, aadaab!
bahut dinoN baad aap kii koii Ghazal dekhii, aur paRh kar vuhii lutf aayaa jo aap ke kalaam kii sifat hai. daad qubuul farmaaiye!
niyaazmand,
Irfan :Abid: