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Aek taazah Ghazal: Irfan Barabankwi, Jeddah.

Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 9:31 am
by irfan barabankwi

MuHtarameen Ahbaab-e-sukhan,

Tasleemaat,

Taif, Saudi Arab, ke aek adabi idaare kii jaanib se diye houe TaraHi misrea per apni ghazal mukammal karke use yahaN pesh karne kii saAadat Haasil karrahaa hooN.

Ummeed ke aap apne giranqadr tabsiraoN se navaazkar mujhe shukriyah adaa karne kaa mauqa denge.

GHAZAL

jo khud gharaz haiN uske samar dekh rahey haiN
be laus magar hal - e - shajar dekh rayey haiN

mehfil meiN sabhi unki nazar dekh rahey haiN
wo husn ke jadoo ka asar dekh rahey haiN

ik bar meiN hoti nahi is dil ko tasal l i
so unki taraf bar -e - digar dekh rahey haiN

jo teergi - e- shub se pareshan bahut they
"kis shauq se aghaz-e-sahar dekh rahey haiN"

darbar meiN jakar jo kabhi jhukte nahi thay
nezoN pa sajay aaj wo sar dekh rahey haiN

sajday kiye jatay nahi her aik ke dar per
jis se hameiN nisbat hai wo dar dekh rahey haiN

inAam-e-safar wo hai nigahoN meiN hamari
chehray pa jo ye gard-e-safar dekh rahye hain

darkar hai dastar ki izzat ko bahchana
nadan haiN wo log jo sar dekh rahey hain

wo dekh raha hai ke kahaN ja ke wo barsay
yaN hum kabhi badal, kabhi ghar dekh rahey haiN

jo su - e- waTan jaye hai Irfan yahaN say
us rah ko ba deeda - e- tar dekh rahey haiN
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Khair Andesh,
Irfan Barabankwi, Jeddah.

Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 11:39 am
by Star Mind
moHtarami Irfan SaaHb, aadaab

janaab aap ki Ghazal bohut Khoob hai , girah bohut achchi lagaayee hai aap ne ! sabhi ash'aar pasand aaye maqt^a' bhi nehaayat u'mdah hai !

daad qabool kejeye ! shukriya

moKhliS :

Zia Baloch

Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 12:15 pm
by Anmol
Adaab, Irfan Sahib!!

Aap ki ghazal bohot Khoob hay, daad balke DheroN daad aap k liye..

Shukria.

bahut bahut shukriyah

Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 4:27 pm
by irfan barabankwi
janab zia saheb

ghazal ki pazirai ka bahut bahut shukriyah.

khair andaish

iran barbankwi

shukriya

Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 4:28 pm
by irfan barabankwi
mohtarmah
anmol sahibah

bahu dino bad aapse mukhatib ho raha hooN. ghazal ke pasandeedgi ka bahut bahut shukriyah

khair andaish

iran barabankwi

Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 7:09 pm
by Shummu
wah bahut khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne..giraah samaiT tamaam sher pasand aaye...daad haazir hai Irfan sahab :grin:



Shumaila