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ik choti si koshish
Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 12:34 pm
by Handsome
Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 10:49 pm
by Ibn-e-siddique
Handsome saHib
salaam arz hai
aap ki ye saada si nazm hamen pasand aayee
bahot khoob
Amjad
Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:30 am
by Anmol
Bohot khoob, janaab. Daad qubool kijiye.
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:22 am
by Shummu
wah handsome humein nahi maaloom tha ke aap shayri bhi karte hain..aap ki nazm bahut hasaas hai..dil ko lagi....aap ke aur bhi kalaam ka intizaar rahega..
Shumaila
Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:59 am
by Handsome
Ibn-e-siddique wrote:Handsome saHib
salaam arz hai
aap ki ye saada si nazm hamen pasand aayee
bahot khoob
Amjad
wasalam
pasand kernay ka shukerya
khush rahain
Handsome
Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:59 am
by Handsome
Anmol wrote:Bohot khoob, janaab. Daad qubool kijiye.
Bohat shukerya
Khush rahin
Handsome
Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 10:00 am
by Handsome
sara_j wrote:bohat khoob handsome...aap bhi shayri ka shaukh rakhte hain.........
lekin jis mauzzu per likhe hain acha laga.
isi tarah likhte rahiye.
sara
hmm lagta hay app meri nazam ka merkazi khial samagh gai hay
pasand kernay ka shukerya
Khush rahain
Handsome
Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 10:01 am
by Handsome
Shummu wrote:wah handsome humein nahi maaloom tha ke aap shayri bhi karte hain..aap ki nazm bahut hasaas hai..dil ko lagi....aap ke aur bhi kalaam ka intizaar rahega..
Shumaila
hmmm ary may bohat bada shair ho Galib kay bad mera hi to number at ahy
Pasand kernay ka shykerya
Khush rahin
Handsome