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ik choti si koshish

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 12:34 pm
by Handsome
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Posted: Sat Nov 19, 2005 10:49 pm
by Ibn-e-siddique
Handsome saHib

salaam arz hai

aap ki ye saada si nazm hamen pasand aayee

bahot khoob

Amjad

Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2005 6:30 am
by Anmol
Bohot khoob, janaab. Daad qubool kijiye.

Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:22 am
by Shummu
wah handsome humein nahi maaloom tha ke aap shayri bhi karte hain..aap ki nazm bahut hasaas hai..dil ko lagi....aap ke aur bhi kalaam ka intizaar rahega..

Shumaila

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:59 am
by Handsome
Ibn-e-siddique wrote:Handsome saHib

salaam arz hai

aap ki ye saada si nazm hamen pasand aayee

bahot khoob

Amjad
wasalam

pasand kernay ka shukerya

khush rahain
Handsome :twisted:

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:59 am
by Handsome
Anmol wrote:Bohot khoob, janaab. Daad qubool kijiye.
Bohat shukerya

Khush rahin
Handsome

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 10:00 am
by Handsome
sara_j wrote:bohat khoob handsome...aap bhi shayri ka shaukh rakhte hain.........
lekin jis mauzzu per likhe hain acha laga.

isi tarah likhte rahiye.

sara

hmm lagta hay app meri nazam ka merkazi khial samagh gai hay

pasand kernay ka shukerya

Khush rahain
Handsome

Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 10:01 am
by Handsome
Shummu wrote:wah handsome humein nahi maaloom tha ke aap shayri bhi karte hain..aap ki nazm bahut hasaas hai..dil ko lagi....aap ke aur bhi kalaam ka intizaar rahega..

Shumaila

hmmm ary may bohat bada shair ho Galib kay bad mera hi to number at ahy :twisted:


Pasand kernay ka shykerya

Khush rahin
Handsome