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ham sar jhukaaye baiThe haiN qaatil ke saamne
Posted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 5:27 am
by zaamin
hai sar kashii rawaan dawaan baatil ke saamne
ham sar jhukaaye baiThe haiN qaatil ke saamne
zakhm-e-jigar rafoo-shudaa phir se na khul paRhe
yooN lab na laalaah kiijiye bismil ke saamne.
Qatraa-ye-shabnam-e-subH main tere noor se
Bujhta diyaa basaarat-e-kaamil ke saamne
Manzil muheet jiski thii lehroN ke dosh per
Duubii safiina aa vuhii saahil ke saamne.
Wuqa’ t hai kyaa jawaahar-o-gauhar ki,yaar kii
Thodii pe TimTimaate huwe til ke saamne.
Hai inhesaar-e-husn bhii talab-e-razaa-e-‘ishq
Ab kyaa taqaazaa kiijiye saa`il ke saamne
Hai gar giraaN taham kih giraan-qadr ishq bhii
Har har khazaanaa haif is haasil ke saamne
Kar deNge gar ho raag meiN bala-tarii bharam
Terii nawaa-ye-naaz ko ko’il ke saamne.
“Zaamin” ko kyaa hai kaam qamar se kih shams se
Sab haif husn-e-yaar ki jhilmil ke saamne
zaamin
Re: ham sar jhukaaye baiThe haiN qaatil ke saamne
Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 10:31 pm
by MAHROO
zaamin wrote:hai sar kashii rawaan dawaan baatil ke saamne
ham sar jhukaaye baiThe haiN qaatil ke saamne
zakhm-e-jigar rafoo-shudaa phir se na khul paRhe
yooN lab na laalaah kiijiye bismil ke saamne.
Qatraa-ye-shabnam-e-subH main tere noor se
Bujhta diyaa basaarat-e-kaamil ke saamne
Manzil muheet jiski thii lehroN ke dosh per
Duubii safiina aa vuhii saahil ke saamne.
Wuqa’ t hai kyaa jawaahar-o-gauhar ki,yaar kii
Thodii pe TimTimaate huwe til ke saamne.
Hai inhesaar-e-husn bhii talab-e-razaa-e-‘ishq
Ab kyaa taqaazaa kiijiye saa`il ke saamne
Hai gar giraaN taham kih giraan-qadr ishq bhii
Har har khazaanaa haif is haasil ke saamne
Kar deNge gar ho raag meiN bala-tarii bharam
Terii nawaa-ye-naaz ko ko’il ke saamne.
“Zaamin” ko kyaa hai kaam qamar se kih shams se
Sab haif husn-e-yaar ki jhilmil ke saamne
zaamin
zaamin saab aadaab;
aapka kalaam mai aur sites per bhi parhti rehti hoon aur mujhe pasand
aata hai; yeh ghazal ka khayaal bhi acha hai par agar aapko naagawaar na lagay tau mai yeh kahoon ke ghazal ka pehla misra, teesra aur panchwaan shair aapki nazar e saani chahtay hain; likhtay rahiye aur khush rahiye;
naacheez,
mahroo
Re: ham sar jhukaaye baiThe haiN qaatil ke saamne
Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 10:32 pm
by MAHROO
zaamin wrote:hai sar kashii rawaan dawaan baatil ke saamne
ham sar jhukaaye baiThe haiN qaatil ke saamne
zakhm-e-jigar rafoo-shudaa phir se na khul paRhe
yooN lab na laalaah kiijiye bismil ke saamne.
Qatraa-ye-shabnam-e-subH main tere noor se
Bujhta diyaa basaarat-e-kaamil ke saamne
Manzil muheet jiski thii lehroN ke dosh per
Duubii safiina aa vuhii saahil ke saamne.
Wuqa’ t hai kyaa jawaahar-o-gauhar ki,yaar kii
Thodii pe TimTimaate huwe til ke saamne.
Hai inhesaar-e-husn bhii talab-e-razaa-e-‘ishq
Ab kyaa taqaazaa kiijiye saa`il ke saamne
Hai gar giraaN taham kih giraan-qadr ishq bhii
Har har khazaanaa haif is haasil ke saamne
Kar deNge gar ho raag meiN bala-tarii bharam
Terii nawaa-ye-naaz ko ko’il ke saamne.
“Zaamin” ko kyaa hai kaam qamar se kih shams se
Sab haif husn-e-yaar ki jhilmil ke saamne
zaamin
zaamin saab aadaab;
aapka kalaam mai aur sites per bhi parhti rehti hoon aur mujhe pasand
aata hai; yeh ghazal ka khayaal bhi acha hai par agar aapko
naagawaar na lagay tau mai yeh kahoon ke ghazal ka pehla misra,
teesra aur panchwaan shair aapki nazar e saani chahtay hain; likhtay rahiye aur khush rahiye;
naacheez,
mahroo
ps; admin yeh duplicate ho gaya hai edit karne ke chakkar mein plz isse delete kardijeeye, shukriya.
mahroo
Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 12:12 am
by zaamin
moharmamehroo sahiba:
jawaab mein taakhir ke liye ma'azrat chaahata hoon;aap ki di huyii tajazeez pe zarror gaurkaroong;dar-asal time ke kami ke baais jaldi mein likhi gayii tehreer hai,aur doosre abhii navmashq aur taalib-e-ilm hoon is field mein;app doston ke zer-e-shafqat zaroor kuchh seekh paaunga
naya saal aap ke liye khushiyon aur barakaton se labrez ho
duago
zaamin