yaaraan-e-meHfil: tasleemaat!

:Internet: kee ek Urdu meHfil meN Faiz Ahmad "Faiz" kaa ek miSra' t^araH ke t^aur par diyaa gayaa hai aur sab se us par t^aba'-aazmaayee kee farmaa,yish kee gayee hai. miSra' hai:

nah ab raqeeb, nah naaSeH, nah Gham-gusaar koyee
"tum ashnaa th`e to th`eeN aashnaa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!"

radeef: kyaa kyaa
qaafiYe: aashnaa,iyaaN, be-wafaa,iyaaN waGhairah

Faiz SaaHeb kee t^araH meN Ghazal kehnaa KhaaSah mushkil hai. is zameen meN :qaafiyah taNg: to naheeN hai lekin radeef :kyaa kyaa: ne she'r-goyee par saKht paabandee lagaa dee hai aur ma'nee-aafreenee joo-e-sheer ho kar reh gayee hai. aap ko i'lm ho gaa keh Mir Taqi "Mir" aisee zameen meN apne zamaaneh kee maKhSooS zabaan ( :aa,iyaaN, khaa,iyaaN:) ista'maal karte haiN. maiN ne bh`ee yehee Soorat iKhtiyaar kee hai. is se maqSood Khudaa-nah-Khwaastah Khudaa-e-suKhan kaa :muNh chiRaanaa: naheeN hai bal.k apnee mushkil aasaan karnaa hai. so ab Ghazal dekh`iYe. aap kee raaYe kaa intiz^aar rahe gaa.

mushkil alfaaz^ ke ma'nee likh` rahaa hooN. shaayad kisee ke kaam aa jaaYeN!

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"
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GHAZAL:

hameN Khdaa kee qasam! yaad aa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!
jafaa ke bhes meN woh aashnaa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!

umeed-o-aarzoo jee meN basaa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa
fareb i'shq meN daanistah khaa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!

Khudee se kuch` nah milaa, be-Khudee se kuch` nah milaa
Hareem-e-shauq meN zeHmat uTh`aa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!

inheeN se yaad hai taazah gaYe zamaaneh kee
hameN a'zeez haiN teree judaa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!

miyaan-e-Ka'bah-o-butKhaanah gum khaRe th`e ham
naz^ar jo Khud peh paRee tujh` ko paa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!

nah deed kee koyee Soorat, nah waSl kee ummeed
ph`ir us peh haiN miree be-dast-o-paa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!

fareb-e-dasht-e-tamannaa meN mujh` ko ch`oR gayeeN
Khayaal-o-Khwaab kee meHshar-numaa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!

nah teree dostee achh`ee, nah dushmanee achh`ee
banaa rakh`ee haiN yeh too ne Khudaa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!

maqaam-e-i'shq meN "Sarwar"! tujh`e bh`ee le DoobeeN
tiree anaa, yeh tiree Khud-numaa,iyaaN kyaa kyaa!
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Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"
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aa,iyaaN = aayeeN
basaa,iyaaN = basaayeeN
danistah = jaan boojh` kar
khaa,iyaaN = kh`aayeeN
Hareem-e-shauq = i'shq ke gh`ar ke andar
uTh`aai,yaaN = uTh`aayeeN
miyaan = beech, darmiyaan
paa,iyaaN = paayaa
be-dast-o-paa,iyaaN = haath`-pair kaa nah honaa, majbooriyaaN
dasht-e-tamannaa = aarzoo kaa jaNgal
meHshar-numaay,iaaN = qiyaamat uTh`aanaa
anaa = maiN, :ego:
Khud-numaa,iyaaN = apne aap ko baRaa dikh`aanaa

muHtaramee Nazir SaaHeb: aadaab!

nawaazish aur i'zzat-afzaayee ke liYe aap kaa shukr-guZaar hooN! jee haaN maiN aap se muttafiq hooN keh Faiz ke miSre' meN :the to theeN: bohat a'jeeb-o-Ghareeb lag rahaa hai lekin dene waale ne yehee t^araH dee th`ee! so us par fikr laazim huyee. kisee wajh se Faiz kee naz^ar se apnee yeh Khaamee naheeN guZree ho gee. wallah-o-a'lam!

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"

muHtarimah Dunya SaaHebah: aadaab!

aap kee daad mere liYe i'zzat-afzaayee kaa baa,ic hai aur maiN is ke liYe shukr-guZaar hooN! Khush rahiYe!

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"

muKarramee Ruswa SaaHeb: aadaab!

yaad-aawaree ke liYe mamnoon hooN. Ghazal aap ko pasand aayee aur yeh mere liYe masarrat aur i'zzat kaa baa,ic huwaa!

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"