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Faiz Ahmed Faiz ki zameen meN chund ashAAr.................
Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 4:57 pm
by jawaid badauni
Dosto! aadaab arz hai.
Ghazal kya kahee hai monH chiRaayaa hai. Mujhe mAlum tha in buzurgoN ki zameeN men qalam ka hal chalaana itna asaan nahiN magar azeezi Muzaffar SaHab ka hukm bhi to nazar andaaz nahiN kiya ja sakta. Chund TooTe phooTe sher bhej raha hooN; jaise bhi haiN qubool farmaaiye aur apni graNqadr aara se nawaaziye. Mujhe aapke tabsaroN ka intezaar rahega.
Apka MuKhlis
Jawaid
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Ghazal
hoiiN udhar se shikeb aazmaiyaaN kya kya
idhar se dete rahe hum duhaaiyaaN kya kya
qalam wohee hai qalam ka mizaaj bhi hai wohee
badal gaii haiN magar roshnaaiiyaaN kya kya
anaa fasaad ki maaN hai mira yaqeen karo
karaaiiN isne jahaN meN laRaaiiyaaN kya kya
ghazab kiya keh jo aayeenah saamne rakhkha
dikhaaii dene lagee haiN buraaiiyaan kya kya
hawas ki sard hawaaoN se phir bhi bach nah sake
ameer oRh ke leTe raZaaiyaN kya kya
“Bhale ka ant bhala hai” yeh sochker ab tak
jahaN meN karte rahe hum bhalaaiyaaNkya kya
Kisee se aaNkh milane ki der thee “Jawaid”
hamaree hone lageeN jug haNsaaiiyaaN kya kya
Bahut khoob
Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 2:11 am
by Abdullah Nazir
MuHtarami oAzeezi
Jawaid Badayuni SaaHib,
PurkhulooS tasleemaat, 
Faiz Ahmed Faiz ki ghazal ki zameen meiN aapki TaraHi ghazal bahut pasand aayie jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
hoiiN udhar se shikeb aazmaiyaaN kya kya
idhar se dete rahe hum duhaaiyaaN kya kya
Waah waah, bahut achchaa maTlaA hei.
qalam wohee hai qalam ka mizaaj bhi hai wohee
badal gaii haiN magar roshnaaiiyaaN kya kya
Bahut khoob, waah waah
anaa fasaad ki maaN hai mira yaqeen karo
karaaiiN isne jahaN meN laRaaiiyaaN kya kya
Kyaa kehne. ana yahaaN bamaAni "ghuroor o takabbur" bilkul durust hei aur sheAr bhi maAnavi liHaaz se aek Haqeeqat per mabni hei. Waah waah.
ghazab kiya keh jo aayeenah saamne rakhkha
dikhaaii dene lagee haiN buraaiiyaan kya kya
Waah waah waah waah waah waah, bahut hii khoob.
hawas ki sard hawaaoN se phir bhi bach nah sake
ameer oRh ke leTe raZaaiyaN kya kya
“Bhale ka ant bhala hai” yeh sochker ab tak
jahaN meN karte rahe hum bhalaaiyaaNkya kya
jee haaN kar bhalaa tou houwe bhalaa aur neki kar daryaa meiN Daal jo muHaavire heiN unkaa yehi maTlab hei. Isi bunyaad meiN jo kuch bhii aap bhalaayiaaN karte rahe heiN wo be-gharaZ Amal thaa jiskaa phal agar is dunyaa meiN nah mile tou insha'allah aakhirat meiN Zaroor milegaa. Waah waah.
Kisee se aaNkh milane ki der thee “Jawaid”
hamaree hone lageeN jug haNsaaiiyaaN kya kya
jug hansaayiyaoN se kyaa farq paRtaa hei. Yeh tou dunyaa ke rasm o riwaaj meiN shaamil hei. Agar do Tarfah muHabbat hou tou phir dunyaa kii kyaa parvaa. BaharHaal, aapkaa maqTaA bahut pasand aayaa jo qaabil-e-daad o teHseen hei.
MajmooAi Taur per aapki ghazal beHad pasand aayi jiske liye khaaksaar dobaarah daad aur mubaarakbaad pesh kartaa hei.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:15 am
by jawaid badauni
dunya wrote:
Janab Jawaid Badauni Sahib,
aadaab o tasleemat,
aapki ghazal behad pasand aayi jiske liye maiN apni daad aur mubarakbad pesh karti hooN.
Isi Tarah aap hameN apne dilkash kalaam se navazte rehiye aur mustafeed houne kaa mauqa faraham karte rehiye. shukriya.
khair andesh,
dunya.
Mohtarmah Duniya SaHibah,
Aadaab
Himmat afzaaii ke liye marhoon-e minnat hooN. Mujhe Khooshi hai ghazal ko aap ne pasand farmaya. Ummid hai aaindah bhi apne graNqadr tasarey se nawaazti raheNgee.
MuKhliS
Jawaid
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:17 am
by jawaid badauni
Mohtaram Abdullah Nazir SaHab
Aadaab qubool farmaaiye
Aapke graNqadr tabsarey ke liye behud mamnoon hooN. Ummid hai aaindah bhi meri rahnumaai karte raheNge.
Jo lafz aap ko pasaNd nahiN tha maiN ne aapke mashware ke mutabiq badal liya hai.
DoaaoN meN shamil rakhiyega.
Ahqar
Jawaid
Re: Faiz Ahmed Faiz ki zameen meN chund ashAAr..............
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:20 am
by Mahtab Qadr
Bahut khoob jawaid sahib aapki ghazal pasand aai. tabsira tafseeli kar na paaya ke kuch masroofiat hai, waise aapki shayeri par tabsira bhi ham jaise kia karieN huzoor :)
shukria
mahtab qadr
jawaid badauni wrote:
Dosto! aadaab arz hai.
Ghazal kya kahee hai monH chiRaayaa hai. Mujhe mAlum tha in buzurgoN ki zameeN men qalam ka hal chalaana itna asaan nahiN magar azeezi Muzaffar SaHab ka hukm bhi to nazar andaaz nahiN kiya ja sakta. Chund TooTe phooTe sher bhej raha hooN; jaise bhi haiN qubool farmaaiye aur apni graNqadr aara se nawaaziye. Mujhe aapke tabsaroN ka intezaar rahega.
Apka MuKhlis
Jawaid
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Ghazal
hoiiN udhar se shikeb aazmaiyaaN kya kya
idhar se dete rahe hum duhaaiyaaN kya kya
qalam wohee hai qalam ka mizaaj bhi hai wohee
badal gaii haiN magar roshnaaiiyaaN kya kya
anaa fasaad ki maaN hai mira yaqeen karo
karaaiiN isne jahaN meN laRaaiiyaaN kya kya
ghazab kiya keh jo aayeenah saamne rakhkha
dikhaaii dene lagee haiN buraaiiyaan kya kya
hawas ki sard hawaaoN se phir bhi bach nah sake
ameer oRh ke leTe raZaaiyaN kya kya
“Bhale ka ant bhala hai” yeh sochker ab tak
jahaN meN karte rahe hum bhalaaiyaaNkya kya
Kisee se aaNkh milane ki der thee “Jawaid”
hamaree hone lageeN jug haNsaaiiyaaN kya kya
bahut achchi ghazal kahi hei aap ne mashaallah
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:28 am
by abdulhadiruswa
janabe muhtaram Jawaid badauni Sahib,
Tasleemat,
Aapki ghazal paRhkar dil khush hougaya. Isqdar dilkash ghazal kehna aap hi ka haq hei. Khaksar ki dili daad qubool farmayiye. Ummeed ke ayindah bhi apka kalam sunne ko milta rahega.
Talib e duaa,
ruswa
Re: Faiz Ahmed Faiz ki zameen meN chund ashAAr..............
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 7:26 pm
by jawaid badauni
Mahtab Qadr wrote:Bahut khoob jawaid sahib aapki ghazal pasand aai. tabsira tafseeli kar na paaya ke kuch masroofiat hai, waise aapki shayeri par tabsira bhi ham jaise kia karieN huzoor :)
shukria
mahtab qadr
jawaid badauni wrote:
Dosto! aadaab arz hai.
Ghazal kya kahee hai monH chiRaayaa hai. Mujhe mAlum tha in buzurgoN ki zameeN men qalam ka hal chalaana itna asaan nahiN magar azeezi Muzaffar SaHab ka hukm bhi to nazar andaaz nahiN kiya ja sakta. Chund TooTe phooTe sher bhej raha hooN; jaise bhi haiN qubool farmaaiye aur apni graNqadr aara se nawaaziye. Mujhe aapke tabsaroN ka intezaar rahega.
Apka MuKhlis
Jawaid
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Ghazal
hoiiN udhar se shikeb aazmaiyaaN kya kya
idhar se dete rahe hum duhaaiyaaN kya kya
qalam wohee hai qalam ka mizaaj bhi hai wohee
badal gaii haiN magar roshnaaiiyaaN kya kya
anaa fasaad ki maaN hai mira yaqeen karo
karaaiiN isne jahaN meN laRaaiiyaaN kya kya
ghazab kiya keh jo aayeenah saamne rakhkha
dikhaaii dene lagee haiN buraaiiyaan kya kya
hawas ki sard hawaaoN se phir bhi bach nah sake
ameer oRh ke leTe raZaaiyaN kya kya
“Bhale ka ant bhala hai” yeh sochker ab tak
jahaN meN karte rahe hum bhalaaiyaaNkya kya
Kisee se aaNkh milane ki der thee “Jawaid”
hamaree hone lageeN jug haNsaaiiyaaN kya kya
Azeezi Mahtab Qadr SaHab
Aapne ghazal paRh lee aur jawab bhi diya, mere liye itna hi kaafihai. Aajkal aap kum hidikhaaii dete haiN.
Ummid haimizaaj baKhair hoNge.
MuKhliS
Jawaid
Re: bahut achchi ghazal kahi hei aap ne mashaallah
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 7:28 pm
by jawaid badauni
abdulhadiruswa wrote:
janabe muhtaram Jawaid badauni Sahib,
Tasleemat,
Aapki ghazal paRhkar dil khush hougaya. Isqdar dilkash ghazal kehna aap hi ka haq hei. Khaksar ki dili daad qubool farmayiye. Ummeed ke ayindah bhi apka kalam sunne ko milta rahega.
Talib e duaa,
ruswa
Mohtarmee wa azeezi Ruswa SaHab,
Tasleemaat
Aapki purkhuloos daad ke liye aap ka behud mamnoon hooN.
Ummid hai aaindah bhi himmat afzaaii karte raheNge.
MuKhliS
Jawaid