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yaad bhi unki hamsafar na hui
Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 12:41 pm
by fatimah
aslaam_u_alikam
yaad bhi unki hamsafar na hui
aur duaa koi baa acar na houi
esey uljhey terey jhameiloN main
zindagi tujh ko bhi khabar na huii
qissa-e-dard jaante the sab
be.khabar ! bas tujhe khabar na houi
umr bhar uljhanon ko suljhaaya
do ghari chein sey basar nah houi
khavaahishein to hazaar thiin lekin
aik bhi poori umr bhar na hui
her gharee deep hum jalaatey rahey
per khushi ki kabhi saHar na houi
Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 5:42 am
by Star Mind
Fatima SaaHiba, aadaab
maashaa Allah bohut dilkash Ghazal hai ! mujhe Khaas tor pe ye shea'r
"qissa-e-dard.........................
bohut pasand aayaa ! DheroN daad qabool kejeye ! shukriya
Zia Baloch
Bahut khoob
Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 4:05 am
by Abdullah Nazir
MuHtaramah
Fatimah SaaHibah,
PurkhulooS tasleemaat,
Aapki yeh TaraHi ghazal bahut achchi hei. Saar ashAar dilkash heiN. Is kaamyaab takhleeq per meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
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Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:01 am
by Shummu
Fatima wrote:
qissa-e-dard jaante the sab
be.khabar ! bas tujhe khabar na houi
umr bhar uljhanon ko suljhaaya
do ghari chein sey basar nah houi
wah Fatima wah bahut khoob...tumhair ghazla ke ye do sher bahut zyaada pasand aaye..daad haazir hai..aise hi achcha achcha likhti raho
Shumaila
Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 9:17 am
by fatimah
sara_j wrote:Dear fatima,
adaab,
aek arse baad apki tehreer se masroor houne ka mauqa mila.
bohat hi umda kavish hai....ghazal tamaam pasand aayi ,
khaas ye ashaar kuch ziyada pasand aaye:
yaad bhi unki hamsafar na hui
aur duaa koi baa acar na houi
qissa-e-dard jaante the sab
be.khabar ! bas tujhe khabar na houi
khavaahishein to hazaar thiin lekin
aik bhi poori umr bhar na hui
her gharee deep hum jalaatey rahey
per khushi ki kabhi saHar na houi
mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
sara
aslaam_u_alikam
sara ji is qadr pazeraai key liye main aap ki mumnoon hun
shukriya
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 8:35 am
by fatimah
Star Mind wrote:Fatima SaaHiba, aadaab
maashaa Allah bohut dilkash Ghazal hai ! mujhe Khaas tor pe ye shea'r
"qissa-e-dard.........................
bohut pasand aayaa ! DheroN daad qabool kejeye ! shukriya
Zia Baloch
aslaam_u_alikam
shukriya Zia saahib
Re: yaad bhi unki hamsafar na hui
Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 8:57 am
by Mahtab Qadr
Fatima ji
aapki ghazal ka har sher acha hai, poori ghazal pasand aai. itni saada zaban o bayan ke sath itne achay mazameen bandhna aapki sheri salahiatoN ka mazhar hai.
shukria
Mahtab Qadr
fatimah wrote:aslaam_u_alikam
yaad bhi unki hamsafar na hui
aur duaa koi baa acar na houi
esey uljhey terey jhameiloN main
zindagi tujh ko bhi khabar na huii
qissa-e-dard jaante the sab
be.khabar ! bas tujhe khabar na houi
umr bhar uljhanon ko suljhaaya
do ghari chein sey basar nah houi
khavaahishein to hazaar thiin lekin
aik bhi poori umr bhar na hui
her gharee deep hum jalaatey rahey
per khushi ki kabhi saHar na houi
Re: yaad bhi unki hamsafar na hui
Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 7:59 pm
by Mawra
fatimah wrote:aslaam_u_alikam
yaad bhi unki hamsafar na hui
aur duaa koi baa acar na houi
esey uljhey terey jhameiloN main
zindagi tujh ko bhi khabar na huii
qissa-e-dard jaante the sab
be.khabar ! bas tujhe khabar na houi
umr bhar uljhanon ko suljhaaya
do ghari chein sey basar nah houi
khavaahishein to hazaar thiin lekin
aik bhi poori umr bhar na hui
her gharee deep hum jalaatey rahey
per khushi ki kabhi saHar na houi
Bohat Khoob Fatimah!!! :rose