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ek ghazal
Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 12:48 pm
by Shafeeq
jab mohabbat ki ibtidaa karna
tum mujhe yaad kar liya karna
unki zulfoN ke pech waa karna
gardish-e-waqt ko rihaa karna
tere band-e-qabaa ka khulna hai
uThhte sooraj ka saamna karna
faaslah kuchh tau hum meiN tum meiN rahe
ajnabi ki taraH milaa karna
zindagi zaKhm hi sahee lekiN
haNste haNste ise sahaa karna
maut jis ko qadam qadam aaye
maatam us zindagi ka kya karna
aql ko dil ke darmiyaaN rakhna
jab bhi apnoN se mashwara karna
uski khushbu bhi kuchh uRa laana
karam itna bas ai saba karna
baat jab bhi Khuloos ki nikle
zikr apne Shafeeq ka karna
Re: ek ghazal
Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 5:57 pm
by tahira Masood
Shafeeq wrote:
maut jis ko qadam qadam aaye
maatam us zindagi ka kya karna
aql ko dil ke darmiyaaN rakhna
jab bhi apnoN se mashwara karna
uski khushbu bhi kuchh uRa laana
karam itna bas ai saba karna
baat jab bhi Khuloos ki nikle
zikr apne Shafeeq ka karna
Mashallah bohat khoob kalaam hai
yeh ahsaar khaaS taur per pasand aaey
bohat a'alaa haiN
dilee daad qabuul fermaaeiN
Bahut khoob, waah waah
Posted: Sat May 20, 2006 5:53 am
by Abdullah Nazir
MuHtarami
Shafeeq SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aapki ghazal pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
MULAAHIZAAT:
jab mohabbat ki ibtidaa karna
tum mujhe yaad kar liya karna
MeHboobah se khiTaab karne meiN anokhaa pan hei. waise mafhoom bilkul vaaZeh hei. waah.
unki zulfoN ke pech waa karna
gardish-e-waqt ko rihaa karna
Bahut khoob, waah waah.
tere band-e-qabaa ka khulna hai
uThhte sooraj ka saamna karna
Tashaabuh paidaa karne kaa achchaa tajribah hei. Waah waah.
faaslah kuchh tau hum meiN tum meiN rahe
ajnabi ki taraH milaa karna
achchaa sheAr hei. Waah waah.
zindagi zaKhm hi sahee lekiN
haNste haNste ise sahaa karna
khoob hei.
maut jis ko qadam qadam aaye
maatam us zindagi ka kya karna
achchaa sheAr hei. waah waah.
aql ko dil ke darmiyaaN rakhna
jab bhi apnoN se mashwara karna
Pahle miSreA ke aakhiri rukn meiN "rakhna" se gurez karnaa chaahiye thaa kiyunke doosre miSreA ki radeef "karna" hei. aapke doosre shaeAr meiN bhi yehi baat hei.
Achchaa sheAr hei, waah waah. Iqbal ne alag andaaz meiN kahaa hei:
Achchaa hei dil ke saath rahe paasbaan-e-Aql
lekin kabhi kabhi ise tanhaa bhi chouRde.
uski khushbu bhi kuchh uRa laana
karam itna bas ai saba karna
achcha sheAr hei, waah waah.
baat jab bhi Khuloos ki nikle
zikr apne Shafeeq ka karna
achcha maqTaA hei, Shafeeq SaaHib. Bahut khoob.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.