• guz#17 by haamidbaaqri

Posted: **Mon May 22, 2006 4:40 pm**

salaamun alaikum
mohtaram abdullah nazir saahib

aapke diye hue misre per hamaari adna kaavish qubool farmaaye.n.

arz kiya hai.........

yahaa.n ghareeb ka kisko khayaal hota hai
ghareeb shakhs ka haq paayemaal hota hai

ghareeb logo.n ka haq hai hamaari daulat mei.n
hamaara apna kahaa.n saara maal hota hai

sabhi hai.n jamm^aa kiye baithe poonjiyaa.n apni
unhe.n gumaa.n hai keh sab kuch halaal hota hai

^azaab se wohi bach paayega qayaamat mei.n
jise huqooqe bashar ka khayaal hota hai

anaaniyat ka dhuaa.n chaar soo hai dunyaa mei.n
"ab aik saans bhi lena muhaal hota hai"

jo khudgharaz hai.n ameero.n mei.n unka aye haamid
firaun ka jo hua unka haal hota hai

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah

Posted: **Mon May 22, 2006 7:00 pm**

MuHtarami
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

MaiN aapka beHad mamnoon hoon ke aap ne Guz.17 ke miSreA per apni TaraHi ghazal se mustafeed houne kaa mauqaA diyaa.

Ghazal ke saare ashAar hi aapke rang meiN Doobe houe heiN aur bahut hi achche heiN, jinke liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

Aap ne apne maqTeA meiN "FirAun" ko "firaun" ke vazn per isteAmaal kiyaa hei jo bilkul SaHeeH hei kiyunkeh urdu shaayeri mein Harf-e-Ain ko "alif" ke vazn per isteAmaal karnaa jaayiz qaraar diyaa gayaa hei.

Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

Posted: **Tue May 23, 2006 6:42 am**

WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtarami
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

MaiN aapka beHad mamnoon hoon ke aap ne Guz.17 ke miSreA per apni TaraHi ghazal se mustafeed houne kaa mauqaA diyaa.

Ghazal ke saare ashAar hi aapke rang meiN Doobe houe heiN aur bahut hi achche heiN, jinke liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

Aap ne apne maqTeA meiN "FirAun" ko "firaun" ke vazn per isteAmaal kiyaa hei jo bilkul SaHeeH hei kiyunkeh urdu shaayeri mein Harf-e-Ain ko "alif" ke vazn per isteAmaal karnaa jaayiz qaraar diyaa gayaa hei.

Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

salaamun alaikum
mohtaram abdullah nazir saahib

aapne hamaari adna kaavish ko padha aur dil se saraaha bhi.hame.n aapka shukriya ada karna chaahiye keh aap hamesha hamaari hauslah afzaayee karte aaye.n hai.n.

hum umeed karte hai.n keh aap aaindah bhi apne zarreen mashwero.n se hame.n nawaaze.nge.

aapki mukhlisaanah daad aur mubarakbaad ke hum behad shukrguzaar hai.n.

allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni rehmato.n ki baarish kare.aameen

aapka mukhlis
haamidbaaqri

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