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BardaSHt kartay hain-----by farhan
Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 12:26 pm
by farhan
Ustaad-e-MuHtaram....
Janab Abdullah Nazir SaHib...
As salamu aalaikum wa rahmatullahi wa barakatuhu...
apni TaraHii ghazal Hazir-e-Khidmat hai...
1) nigaahooN ki tiri jab bay ruKHii bardaSHt kartay hain.
tabassum maiN CHupa kar hum ghamii bardaSHt kartay hain.
2) raQeebooN ko tirii Qurbat muyassar deekh kar jaanaaN,
baRii muSHkil say aankhooN main namii bardaSHt kartay hain.
3) ada-e-naaz kay jalway, khuda rakhkhay k deewaanay,
khud apna thaam kar dil, jaaN kanii bardaSHt kartay hain.
4) baRay naazaaN hain voh apni, nigaah-e-seHr aageeN per,
sataane ko unheN, jaadoogari bardaasht karte heiN.
5) biCHaR kar tujh say zindaa hain, yeh bas jabr-e-tanaffus hei,
kahaN jeetay hain! hum jo zindagii bardaSHt kartay hain.
6) mire lehjay ki talKHii ik kasouTii hai parakhnay ki,
[color]"jo ahl-e-Zarf hotay hain vohii bardaSHt kartay hain."[/color]
7) kaheeN farHan jaisay loog houtay hain zamanay main?
jo apnay dostooN ki duSHmanii bardaSHt kartay hain.
aap ki aara ka muntazir
farHan
Bahut khoob
Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 4:45 am
by Abdullah Nazir
MuHtarami
FarHan SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat, 
Guzarish 21 ke miSreA per aapki TaraHi ghazal bahut kaamyaab hei jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 12:38 pm
by farhan
Ustaad-e-MuHtaram
Janab Abdullah Nazir SaHib,
As salamu aalaikum wa rahmatullahi wa barakatuhu,,,
ghazal ki pazeerayii o pasandeedgii ka shukriya...aap nay is adna kaavish per bhi daad say nawaz...bahut bahut shukriya...
talib-e-dua
farHan.
Re: BardaSHt kartay hain-----by farhan
Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 1:15 pm
by Shummu
farhan wrote:
2) raQeebooN ko tirii Qurbat muyassar deekh kar jaanaaN,
baRii muSHkil say aankhooN main namii bardaSHt kartay hain.
5) biCHaR kar tujh say zindaa hain, yeh bas jabr-e-tanaffus hei,
kahaN jeetay hain! hum jo zindagii bardaSHt kartay hain.
6) mire lehjay ki talKHii ik kasouTii hai parakhnay ki,
[color]"jo ahl-e-Zarf hotay hain vohii bardaSHt kartay hain."[/color]
7) kaheeN farHan jaisay loog houtay hain zamanay main?
jo apnay dostooN ki duSHmanii bardaSHt kartay hain.
farHan
wah bahut khoob farhan..aap to bahut pukhta kalaam likhne lage hain mashaAllah se...alfaaz ka chunaoo bhi pasand aya..dili daad pesh hai ....girah bhi pasand aayi....mubarak ho!
Shumaila
Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 9:28 pm
by zaamin
biCHaR kar tujh say zindaa hain, yeh bas jabr-e-tanaffus hei,
kahaN jeetay hain! hum jo zindagii bardaSHt kartay hain.
6) mire lehjay ki talKHii ik kasouTii hai parakhnay ki,
[color]"jo ahl-e-Zarf hotay hain vohii bardaSHt kartay hain."[/c
eik achchii ghazal;ehsaas aur khayaal se arasta
daad qabool farmaayein,janaab farhan sahib
mukhlis
zaamin
Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 9:54 am
by farhan
Janab Zaamin SaHib...
As salamu aalaikum wa rahmatullahi wa barakatuhu,,,
ghazal ki pazeerayii ka shukriya...daad kay liye main mamnoon hooN.
JAZAKALLAHU KHAIRA...
farhan
Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 11:37 am
by Raji
Janab-e-Farhaan SaaHeb:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,
in dushvaar zameen par itnee achii koshish pesh karne par meree jaanib se bhi daad qubool keejiye.
Khair andesh
Zahida Raees Raji
Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 8:56 pm
by farhan
Raji SaHiba...
Adaab o taslimaat...
aap ko mayri yeh kaavish achchii lagii aur aap nay daad say bhi nawaza...ba sed' aHtaraam main daad qabool karta hoon.. bahut bahut shukriya....
ummid karta hooN aap isi taraH HouSla afzayii farmati raheengii...
talib-e-dua
farhan
Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 11:15 am
by Shummu
mera jawaab kahan hai ....
Re: BardaSHt kartay hain-----by farhan
Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2006 6:31 pm
by farhan
Shummu wrote:
wah bahut khoob farhan..aap to bahut pukhta kalaam likhne lage hain mashaAllah se...alfaaz ka chunaoo bhi pasand aya..dili daad pesh hai ....girah bhi pasand aayi....mubarak ho!
Shumaila
Shummu Ji....
sub say pahlay to main aap say maa'zirat khawh hooN ki.....WALLAH aap ka jawab mayri nazar say nahin guzra.....khudara maa'f kijeaga ki main i wajah say barwaqt jawab nahin day paya.....
daraSl main jab bhi ghar say online hota hooN to sirf 4 ya 5 mins kay liye hota hooN....is ujlat main aap ka jawab mayri nazar say chook gaya...jis ka mujhay bhi hi malaal hai....EEMAAN say keh raha hooN....ik baar phir maa'fi ki darkhast hai;
ab ghazal ki pasandeedgii ka bahut bahut shukriya...alfaaz kay chunavo aur girah ko bhi pasand karnay kay liye main mamnoon hooN...bahut bahut shukriya....
isi tarah housla afzayii farmatay raheaga.....ik baar phir takheer kay liye maa'zirat.....
JAZAKALLAHU KHIRA..
FarHan
Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 5:38 am
by haamidbaaqri
salaamun alaikum
mohtaram farhaan saahib
aapki is behtareen ghazal per hamaari dilee daad haazir hai......qubool farmaaiye.
allah(sbhnwt)kare zore qalam aur ziyaadah
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 9:21 pm
by Star Mind
Jnaab-e-FarHan SaaHib, aadaab
der se sahee magar jawaab dene Haazir howaa hoN !
Farhan SaaHib aap ki taraqqee qaabil-e-Sad taHseen hai ! maashaa Allah aap ke kalaam meiN roz baroz mazeed nikhaar aataa jaarhaa hai ! ye Ghazal bhi bohut pasand aayee ! daad Haazir hai shukriya
Zia Baloch
Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:20 am
by farhan
Star Mind wrote:Jnaab-e-FarHan SaaHib, aadaab
der se sahee magar jawaab dene Haazir howaa hoN !
Farhan SaaHib aap ki taraqqee qaabil-e-Sad taHseen hai ! maashaa Allah aap ke kalaam meiN roz baroz mazeed nikhaar aataa jaarhaa hai ! ye Ghazal bhi bohut pasand aayee ! daad Haazir hai shukriya
Zia Baloch
Janab Zia SaHib,,,
Adaab o Taslimaat
der aaye durust aaye 
Zia Bhai aap nay jin alfaaz main HouSla afzayii farmayii hai voh mayray liye bahut aham hai....kalaam main agar aap ko nikhaal nazar aata hai to is ka sara Credit Urdubandhan aur ST ko jata hai...jahan mujhay bahut kuch seekhanay ka mouQa mila...
Gazal ki pazirayii ka bahut bahut shukriya.......daad kay liye aap ka mamnoon o mutaSHkkur hooN...Shurkiya
JAZAKALLAHU KHAIRA....
farhan
Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:22 am
by farhan
haamidbaaqri wrote:salaamun alaikum
mohtaram farhaan saahib
aapki is behtareen ghazal per hamaari dilee daad haazir hai......qubool farmaaiye.
allah(sbhnwt)kare zore qalam aur ziyaadah
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
Walaikum as salam Haamid SaHib
kaisay hain aap.....janab aap ki dili daad hum Qabool kartay hain...JAZAKALLAHU KHAIRA.....
dua kay liye shukriya....
Farhan
Re: BardaSHt kartay hain-----by farhan
Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 6:49 am
by farhan
sara_j wrote:
Wah farhan sahib! aapki ye ghazal dekh ker ehsaas
houta hai ke aap bohat mehnat kiye hain aur bohat
hi ache ashaar likhe. aapki is kamyaab aur dilkash
ghazal per daad qubool keejiye.
sara
Sara Ji...
Aadaab o taslimaat
Ji...aap any durust farmaya hai is baar choonkay zameen kuch ziyadah hi mushkil thi is liye meHnat bhi khoob karni paRii...ALLAH ka shukar hai ki kuch ashaar hogaye jo aap tamaam KhawateeN o Hazaraat ko pasand bhi hai.....JAZAKUMULLAHU KHAIRA....
aap nay is ghazal per daad say nawaza...main mamnoon o mutashakkur hooN.......JAZAKALLAHU KHAIRA....
isi taraH housla afzayii farmatay raheaga....
farhan