Yeh Ghazal Kaisi Hai ???

Kuhnah mashq ShoAraa kaa kalaam jo beHr meiN hounaa zaroori hei

Moderator: Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar

Post Reply
User avatar
munir-armaan-nasimi
-
-
Posts: 460
Joined: Sat Feb 04, 2006 8:21 am
Location: INDIA
Contact:

Yeh Ghazal Kaisi Hai ???

Post by munir-armaan-nasimi »

Dear Friends,

Salam-o-Rehmat!! I dont know whether I've posted this "Ghazal" in this site or not??? If yes then forgive me otherwise..... Enjoy.....!!

Plz. give me your honest 'comments' and obliged.

Awaiting your response.

Regards,

armaan
Attachments
Ghazal-Humse-Khuddar.gif
Ghazal-Humse-Khuddar.gif (12.28 KiB) Viewed 510 times
User avatar
muhammad_19k
-
-
Posts: 540
Joined: Wed Nov 22, 2006 8:36 am
Location: Lahore
Contact:

Post by muhammad_19k »

Salam Nasmi Sb,

Ye hai hamari eemandaraana raa-aye. Tessra shaAer bohat pasand aayaa. oar aakhri shaAer kuch samajh naheeN aaya. :-). Ishaq meiN khasaraa ki parwa na karnaa to samajh aataa hai. chaliaye khasaaraa maangna bhi samajh meiN aataa hai. laikin khasaaraa "naa maangna" kuch samajh naheeN ayaa.

Allah kare zor e qalam oar ziada.

aap ka mukhlis,
Muhammad Khawar.
Last edited by muhammad_19k on Sun Dec 24, 2006 5:00 am, edited 1 time in total.
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.
+92 321 4435273

938-C-Faisal Town, Lahore.
Pakistan.
+92 42 111516516
muhammad_19k@hotmail.com
User avatar
Abdullah Nazir
-
-
Posts: 2681
Joined: Sat Dec 11, 2004 4:16 am
Location: Jeddah
Contact:

zameen bahut sanglaakh hei

Post by Abdullah Nazir »


MuHtarami o Azeezi
Munir armaan Nasimi SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aap ne koushish zaroor kee hei lekin bilkul banjar zameen kee jaisi Zameen meiN . Aapko chaahiye ke Aam Zameen meiN likhkhaa kareN taakeh un per khulkar tabSirah kiyaa jaaske.

MaiN apni is raaye per iktifaa kartaa hooN aur ummeed hei aapke liye mufeed caabit hougi. Shukriyah.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

Image
User avatar
munir-armaan-nasimi
-
-
Posts: 460
Joined: Sat Feb 04, 2006 8:21 am
Location: INDIA
Contact:

Post by munir-armaan-nasimi »

Qaabil-e-Sad-Ehteram Nazir Bhai
Aur
Saara J.

Aap dono ki baat bilkul sahi hai; Magar Banjar Zameen ko Gulistaan banane ki main ne koshish to kii? Ab ye alag baat hai ke..... kaamyaab nahin hoa. Hairat ki baat yeh bhi hai ke yahi Ghazal main ne All India Mushaira main padh ke Mushaira Loot Chuka Hoon....!!

Anyway, Mushaira kii baat alag hai ye main jaanta hoon. Insha'Allah agli baar apni koshish main jaroor kaamyaab honga.

aap ka apna,

armaan
Iss Dil Main ARMAAN Bahut Hain
Ek Hai Ghar Mehmaan Bahut Hain

MUNIR ARMAAN NASIMI
INDIA.
User avatar
ROSE
-
-
Posts: 29
Joined: Tue Dec 19, 2006 8:03 am

Post by ROSE »

bohat achi ghazal likh hai aapney dahrooooooooooooo daad qabool kareN
Image
User avatar
munir-armaan-nasimi
-
-
Posts: 460
Joined: Sat Feb 04, 2006 8:21 am
Location: INDIA
Contact:

Post by munir-armaan-nasimi »

ROSE Bhai.... armaan-nawazi kaa dheron shukriya..... jaldi qobool karein... the offer valid upto 32nd Dec. 2006.
Iss Dil Main ARMAAN Bahut Hain
Ek Hai Ghar Mehmaan Bahut Hain

MUNIR ARMAAN NASIMI
INDIA.
Post Reply