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apni purani ghazal pesh karrahi hoo.n ...dunya dehlawi
Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 4:15 am
by dunya dehlawi
asaatiza e kiram aur sukhan dousto,
adaab o taslimaat,
Apki khidmat meiN apni aek purani ghazal pesh karrahi hoo.n. Ummeed ke apni qeemati araa se faizyaab houne ka mauqa denge.
Dunya.l
Ghazal
Kya karun vasf e jaur o sitam dousto
Dil shikastah hei aur aankh nam dousto
Ham bhi thay apni dunya mei.n ham dousto
Choomta tha zamana qadam dousto
Chashm e makhmoor e saaqi hei sab kuch hame.n
Kis ko hei khwahish e jaam e jam dousto
Itni ghaflat shi'aari bhi kis kaam ki
Dildehi chahiiye kam se kam dousto
Raahzan bhes mei.n rehnumao.n ke thay
Lutt gaye ham khuda ki qasam dousto
Shayer ban gayi juzv e bargashtagi
Yeh bhi hei.n doustao.n ke karam dousto
Vehhshat e dil ne ham ko bhasam kardiya
Apni hasti hui kal'adam dousto
Gaah mehhroom hei.n aur geh muttma'in
Raah e ulfat mei.n hei.n zer o bam dousto
Masslihhat ki havas mei.n hei.n sab mubtala
Kya arab aur kaisa ajam dousto
Fikr e :dunya: bahut hi paragandah hei
Cheen lo mujh se mera qalam dousto.
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khair andesh,
dunya
Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 1:56 pm
by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar
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moHtaram/moHtarmah Duniya Dehlawi SaHib/SaHibah aadaab! 
aapkee marqoomah-e-bala Ghazal moHtaaj-e-ta'reef naheeN.
aesee kawisheeN shae'ir kee numae,indah ban kar manaSSah-e-shahood par pohonch jatee haiN.
Ghazal
Kya karun vasf e jaur o sitam dousto
Dil shikastah hei aur aankh nam dousto
Ham bhi thay apni dunya mei.n ham dousto
Choomta tha zamana qadam dousto
Chashm e makhmoor e saaqi hei sab kuch hame.n
Kis ko hei khwahish e jaam e jam dousto
Itni ghaflat shi'aari bhi kis kaam ki
Dildehi chahiiye kam se kam dousto
Raahzan bhes mei.n rehnumao.n ke thay
Lutt gaye ham khuda ki qasam dousto
Shayer ban gayi juzv e bargashtagi
Yeh bhi hei.n doustao.n ke karam dousto
Vehhshat e dil ne ham ko bhasam kardiya
Apni hasti hui kal'adam dousto
Gaah mehhroom hei.n aur geh muttma'in
Raah e ulfat mei.n hei.n zer o bam dousto
Masslihhat ki havas mei.n hei.n sab mubtala
Kya arab aur kaisa ajam dousto
Fikr e :dunya: bahut hi paragandah hei
Cheen lo mujh se mera qalam dousto.
meree dilee dad aor mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!
wassalam!
Muz^affar[/align]
Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 6:18 pm
by jawaid badauni
MoHtarma Duniya SaaHibah,
Aadaab
Idhar se guzar raha tha keh achaanak aapki Ghazal per nazar paR gaii.
Bohat Haseen Ghazal hai. Har sher ko paRhne ki bajaye gungunaane ko
dil chaahta hai. Main agar is Haseen Ghazal se mahroom rahta tou apni
mahroomee ka izalah shayad hi kar pata.
Daad qubool kijiye
MuKhliS
Jawaid Badauni