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"Kunwari Suhaagan" .... Aap Sab ke Liiye !!

Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:48 pm
by munir-armaan-nasimi
Urdubandhan ke Sukhan-Fahem Dosto,

Ek Nazm "Kunwari Suhaagan" Pesh Khidmat Hai. Apni Qeemati aara se nawaazein.

Khuda Hafiz,

aap ka apna

armaan

Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 7:54 pm
by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar
moHtaram Muneer Arman SaHib aadaab!

kiYa kehne! baRee khubSuratee se aap ne aek mushkil maZ^moon le kar naz^m kahee hai. aese maZ^ameen meN fik-e-sukhan gehre tajribe aor mua'asharatee masai'l par t^ai'ranah nigah ka muttaqaZ^ee hota hai.
aap ne baRee maharat se naz^m kee roH aor apnee fikree uRaan ke jaohar dikh~ae haiN.

meree dilee dad aor mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!

Wassalam
Muz^affar

Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:21 pm
by munir-armaan-nasimi
Bhai Muzaffar Saheb,

Armaan-nawazi ka tah-e-dil se shukr guzaar hoon. Main 20 to 26 Hyderabad gaya hoa tha...isliye jawab main taakhir hoyi, maajerat chaahta hoon. Bhai jaan, main ek "social activist" hoon aur I have got first hand experience on this issue of "trafficking of women and children".... Abhi Hydb. bhi wahi meeting attend karne gaya tha.......

Agar meri Nazm se koi ek baap, ek bhai, ek behen 'sensitise' ho jaaye aur..... zindagi bhar ke ghum se bach jaaye to samjhoonga ke...... main apni koshish main kaamyaab hoa.

Mere haq main Dua karein.

Khuda Hafiz,

Aapka adna,

armaan

Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:40 pm
by munir-armaan-nasimi
sara_j wrote:hmmm..........armaan sahib,

adaab arz hai.

aapki nazm dekh chuki thi lekin abhi baRi mushkil se

paRhi tou aankhon mein dard hougaya :( zara fonts ki

size baRha deejiye :-)

"aur yeh probem ne...... hamare dil main jo DARD paida kar diya hai..... uska kyaaaaaa????"

bohat hi nazuk mauzzu per likhe hain aur bohat ache se

mazmoon pesh kiye hain lekin bhai ab kahan koi chor jata hai ?

ab to begumaaat saath hi saajan ke uRjaati hain voh din gaye jab

aisa houta tha.

"......AAP INDIA SE BAHAR REHTI HAIN NA THAT'S WHY U R TALKING LIKE THIS..... India ke Punjab main Hoshiyaarpur naam ka ek District hai jahan 14,742 aisi Kunwari Suhaagan rehti hain..... ye mera nahin Govt. ka survey report hai.........." (Aur usi report ne mujh se yeh Nazm Kehlwaya)

"Trafficking of women is rampant in Andhra Pradesh, Kerala, West Bengal, Orissa, Jharkhand, North-East States of India..........."

Aap ko kuch aur DATA chahiye to boliyega......????


mujhe aapke likhne ka andaaz bohat pasand aaya. daad qubool

keejiye :rose aur yunhi likhte rahiye.

sara
Sara jee.... chaliye aap ko mera koii andaaz to pasand aaya... koshish karoonga ka mere likhne ka andaaz kuch aur nikhar jaaye......aap ki dua se!!

Ek Ajnabi Dost........

armaan

Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:40 pm
by Nadir Sir'giroh
M.A.N...........
YooN toA maiN aazaad shaaeri ke khilaaf hooN..
lekin aapke paas mauzooA bohat mauzooN hai.



Jiss Ilaaqe ka aap zikr kar rahe haiN...
Sabb se ziyaadaa KABOOTAR BAAZ bhee waheeN haiN.

Aap ne jo aedaad-o-shumaar bataa'en haiN... uss meN ek aur ka Izaafa kaaaar leN....

Patiyaale da ek hor Baljindar.... Kaneda pohaNch gayaa ...

ToA abb total ho gayaa hai...... 1 4 7 43

Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 4:25 am
by munir-armaan-nasimi
Hi Bombai ki Jaan......
Mere Mohsin Nadir-o-Nayaab Bhai Jaan....

Aap aazaad shaaeri ke khilaaf jaroor hain.... magar mere khilaaf to nahin na....??!!

Jee, abb total ho gayaa hai 14744.....ouchhh....... matlab Mumbai ka ek Nadirwa bhi.... Arabia pohanch gayaa hai......

Aur Bhabhi Jaan kaisi hain????