TaraH miSra 26 -------- Muhammad K. Siddqui.
Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 10:24 am
Yaaraan e bazm ko Salam aor Aadaab
kissi na kissi taraH kuch ashaar tarteeb day hi diaye haiN aor wohi haazir e khidmat haiN.
agar koi shaer aap ko pasand aa jaa-aye to zaroor nishaandahi keejiaye ga.
kissi bhi shaer ki behtari ke leeaye aap ki tajaaveez maire sar aankhoaN par hoaN gi. aor us ke leeaye mairi taraf se paishgi shukriyaa qabool farma-aye.
aap ka shukarguzar,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui
ROMAN
1. aa chuki taazeer jaanaa choR de
yaad bhi aye dil manaanaa choR de
2. Khaab ki taabeer kuch meiN bhi kahooN
1 un se ab milnaa milaanaa choR de
3. KyooN rahe SeHra meiN ik naazuk mizaaj
aankh meiN dilbar basaanaa choR de
4. dil lagaanaa dil lagi jaaisaa naheeN
"koi kaise dil lagaanaa choR de"
5. khhul chukaa uqdaa tirii tadbeer ka
jaan e jaaN nazraiN churaanaa choR de
6. bay niazi ! taigh e Husn e yaar hai
waar seh aor dil jalaanaa choR de
7. seep meiN bantaa hai har qatra guhar 6
chasm e tar,! aansoo bahanaa choR de
8. 3Halqa-aye yaaraN meiN hai boo-e -hasad
kunj e zakhm -aye dil dikhaanaa choR de
9. aajazi meiN hai kamaal fan nihaaN
apne fan ke geet gaanaa choR de.
10. paiRh payaasaa bar lab saHal rahay
mouj gar saHal tak aanaa choR de
11. baat jo nikli paraa-ee ho gayee
5dil ki dil meiN rakh sunaanaa choR de
12. khoon se khinchtaa huwaa khat daikh kar
laash woh shayad lejaanaa choR de
13. Sabr kia karb oa balaa ke baad ho
aye khudaa! ab aazamaanaa choR de
14. hay sikhisataa dil se bay parwaah joa
ka'aabaa ke chakkar lagaanaa choR de
15. shaa'iri :khawar: tiray bas ki kahaaN2
YooN4 ghazal meiN gul khilaanay choR de.
1. Anaa jaanaa
puranaa miSra thaa "un ke ghar meiN aanaa jaanaa choR de"
puraane moshaa-iray meiN kissi dost ne aanaa jaanaa ki tarkeet istemal ki thi jis par ustaad e mohtaram Abudullah Nazir sb ne iss tarkeeb ko aanaa ki alif ke giraa-aye jaane ki wajaa se tabdeel karne ka mashwaraa diyaa thaa. so meiN ne bhi tabdeel kar diyaa hai.
2. kahaaN
ub mujhe "naheeN" se "kahaaN" ziadaa behtar lag rahaa hai [:)]
3. koocha-e-yaaraaN
Janab Jawaid sb ki nishaandahi par kocha ke daira kaar ko kam karne ke leeaye "Halqa" ka lafz istemaal kiyaa hai. mazeed ra-aye ka intezaar rahay ga.
4. too
Jawaid SaHib ke nishaandahi par behtari ki aik koshish. too ko yooN se badal diyaa hai.
5. dil ki dil meiN rakh
puranaa miSraa thaa dil ki rakh dil meiN sunaanaa choR de. bunat ki behtari ke leeaye kar diyaa hai dil ki dil meiN rakh, sunaanaa choR de.
6. seep meiN
seep meiN qatra bhi bantaa hai guhar ko Jawaid sb ki ra-aye par behtar kar diyaa hai.
kissi na kissi taraH kuch ashaar tarteeb day hi diaye haiN aor wohi haazir e khidmat haiN.
agar koi shaer aap ko pasand aa jaa-aye to zaroor nishaandahi keejiaye ga.
kissi bhi shaer ki behtari ke leeaye aap ki tajaaveez maire sar aankhoaN par hoaN gi. aor us ke leeaye mairi taraf se paishgi shukriyaa qabool farma-aye.
aap ka shukarguzar,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui
ROMAN
1. aa chuki taazeer jaanaa choR de
yaad bhi aye dil manaanaa choR de
2. Khaab ki taabeer kuch meiN bhi kahooN
1 un se ab milnaa milaanaa choR de
3. KyooN rahe SeHra meiN ik naazuk mizaaj
aankh meiN dilbar basaanaa choR de
4. dil lagaanaa dil lagi jaaisaa naheeN
"koi kaise dil lagaanaa choR de"
5. khhul chukaa uqdaa tirii tadbeer ka
jaan e jaaN nazraiN churaanaa choR de
6. bay niazi ! taigh e Husn e yaar hai
waar seh aor dil jalaanaa choR de
7. seep meiN bantaa hai har qatra guhar 6
chasm e tar,! aansoo bahanaa choR de
8. 3Halqa-aye yaaraN meiN hai boo-e -hasad
kunj e zakhm -aye dil dikhaanaa choR de
9. aajazi meiN hai kamaal fan nihaaN
apne fan ke geet gaanaa choR de.
10. paiRh payaasaa bar lab saHal rahay
mouj gar saHal tak aanaa choR de
11. baat jo nikli paraa-ee ho gayee
5dil ki dil meiN rakh sunaanaa choR de
12. khoon se khinchtaa huwaa khat daikh kar
laash woh shayad lejaanaa choR de
13. Sabr kia karb oa balaa ke baad ho
aye khudaa! ab aazamaanaa choR de
14. hay sikhisataa dil se bay parwaah joa
ka'aabaa ke chakkar lagaanaa choR de
15. shaa'iri :khawar: tiray bas ki kahaaN2
YooN4 ghazal meiN gul khilaanay choR de.
1. Anaa jaanaa
puranaa miSra thaa "un ke ghar meiN aanaa jaanaa choR de"
puraane moshaa-iray meiN kissi dost ne aanaa jaanaa ki tarkeet istemal ki thi jis par ustaad e mohtaram Abudullah Nazir sb ne iss tarkeeb ko aanaa ki alif ke giraa-aye jaane ki wajaa se tabdeel karne ka mashwaraa diyaa thaa. so meiN ne bhi tabdeel kar diyaa hai.
2. kahaaN
ub mujhe "naheeN" se "kahaaN" ziadaa behtar lag rahaa hai [:)]
3. koocha-e-yaaraaN
Janab Jawaid sb ki nishaandahi par kocha ke daira kaar ko kam karne ke leeaye "Halqa" ka lafz istemaal kiyaa hai. mazeed ra-aye ka intezaar rahay ga.
4. too
Jawaid SaHib ke nishaandahi par behtari ki aik koshish. too ko yooN se badal diyaa hai.
5. dil ki dil meiN rakh
puranaa miSraa thaa dil ki rakh dil meiN sunaanaa choR de. bunat ki behtari ke leeaye kar diyaa hai dil ki dil meiN rakh, sunaanaa choR de.
6. seep meiN
seep meiN qatra bhi bantaa hai guhar ko Jawaid sb ki ra-aye par behtar kar diyaa hai.
khuda ka shukr hai. ab mujh~e tasallee hai. keh aap baqaeedagee se she'er kaheeN ge.