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aik urdu haiku aapki nazr kar rahay haiN
Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 4:44 pm
by haamidbaaqri
dosto
hum aik urdu haiku aapki bacaaratoN ki nazr kar rahay haiN
gar qubool uftad zahay...........
arz kiya hai.......
"paani saa sansaar
behta chal aur badhta jaa
jeevan kay din chaar"
nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah
Re: aik urdu haiku aapki nazr kar rahay haiN
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 12:59 pm
by haamidbaaqri
sara_j wrote:haamidbaaqri wrote:
dosto
hum aik urdu haiku aapki bacaaratoN ki nazr kar rahay haiN
gar qubool uftad zahay...........
arz kiya hai.......
"paani saa sansaar
behta chal aur badhta jaa
jeevan kay din chaar"
nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah
wow! .......
"paani saa sansaar
behta chal aur badhta jaa
jeevan kay din chaar"
intehayii khoobsurat aur mukammal.....dhair saari
daad qubool keejiye.
haiku kya hota ye mujhe nahi maloom kya ye mahiya jaise hai ??
Assalaam o alaikum
azeezah sara saahebah
hausalah afzaayee aur aapki daad ka bahut bahut shukriya.
sara yeh japanese form of poetry hai.
teen lines (5,7,5)meiN aapko sabkuch kehna padhta hai.sirf symbols aur images meiN apni baat rakhni hauti hai yahi iskee khoobi hai.
shukriya
aapka bhai
haamidbaaqri
Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 2:54 am
by yasir shah
Haamid SaaHib !
assalamoa'laikum
khoob haaiku kahee hay - t'aba'.aazmaaee jaaree raKhiye gaa
yasir
shukriya
Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 11:04 am
by haamidbaaqri
yasir shah wrote:Haamid SaaHib !
assalamoa'laikum
khoob haaiku kahee hay - t'aba'.aazmaaee jaaree raKhiye gaa
yasir
wa alaikumussalaam
yasir saahib
hauslah afzaayee kayliye hum aapkay behad mamnoon haiN.
jazakallah
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 3:04 pm
by munir-armaan-nasimi
Beradaram Haamid Saaheb,
Bahut Khoob... Behad sunder "Haiku" hai...!! Alla'h kare zor-e-qalam aur jiyada...
shukriya
Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 2:35 pm
by haamidbaaqri
munir-armaan-nasimi wrote:Beradaram Haamid Saaheb,
Bahut Khoob... Behad sunder "Haiku" hai...!! Alla'h kare zor-e-qalam aur jiyada...
Assalaam o alaikum
mohtaram munir saahib
aapki mukhlisaanah daad aur dua kayliye hum aapkay behad mamnoono mashkoor hain.
jazakallah
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri