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2 - ASAATAZA KI ISLAH ---- AIK KHEL

Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 6:06 am
by muhammad_19k
Salam yaaraan e bazm,

leejiaye aik oar sher likh rahaa hooN iss par tabaa aazamai ki jiaye.

dam miraa niklaa tairay waaday ke saath
tairi ghabrai hoee haaN ki taraH


hay na kamaal ka sha'er?

Laikin is sher meiN bhi iSlaah kar di gayee aor aik lafz tabdeel kar ke iss shaer ko haqeeqat ke qareeb tar kar diyaa gayaa. zara sochiaye kia tabdeeli ho sakti hai.

Ishaara: aik meHboob ko haaN kehay huway taSSawar kijiaye

Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 4:04 pm
by sbashwar
:salaam: Khawar Saheb,
tairi khamoshi hoee haaN ki taraH

Shaier na hote hua khel mein hissa le raha houn.
Shukria

Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 6:10 am
by muhammad_19k
Saraa ji oar Sbashwar SaHib

Walaikum us Salam.

Khel meiN shirkat ke leeaye mamnoon hooN. maqSad sirf ye hai ke kuch damaghi zor aazmai ho ja-aye. aik do din kuch aor jawaabat ka intezaar karte haiN, phir meiN saHeeH jawab paish kar dooN ga.

Duagoa,
Muhammad K Siddiqui.

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:47 pm
by muhammad_19k
Dosto,

Jawab is link par day dia gia hai,

http://forum.urdubandhan.com/phpBB2/vie ... 3037#33037

dua'aa goa,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:48 pm
by muhammad_19k
Dosto,

Jawab is link par day dia gia hai,

http://forum.urdubandhan.com/phpBB2/vie ... 3037#33037

dua'aa goa,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui