2 - ASAATAZA KI ISLAH ---- AIK KHEL
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 6:06 am
Salam yaaraan e bazm,
leejiaye aik oar sher likh rahaa hooN iss par tabaa aazamai ki jiaye.
dam miraa niklaa tairay waaday ke saath
tairi ghabrai hoee haaN ki taraH
hay na kamaal ka sha'er?
Laikin is sher meiN bhi iSlaah kar di gayee aor aik lafz tabdeel kar ke iss shaer ko haqeeqat ke qareeb tar kar diyaa gayaa. zara sochiaye kia tabdeeli ho sakti hai.
Ishaara: aik meHboob ko haaN kehay huway taSSawar kijiaye
leejiaye aik oar sher likh rahaa hooN iss par tabaa aazamai ki jiaye.
dam miraa niklaa tairay waaday ke saath
tairi ghabrai hoee haaN ki taraH
hay na kamaal ka sha'er?
Laikin is sher meiN bhi iSlaah kar di gayee aor aik lafz tabdeel kar ke iss shaer ko haqeeqat ke qareeb tar kar diyaa gayaa. zara sochiaye kia tabdeeli ho sakti hai.
Ishaara: aik meHboob ko haaN kehay huway taSSawar kijiaye