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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 6:11 pm
by najma
najm sahib
itnii khoosroorat aur kamyab ghazal par merii taraf ssaay daad qubool kijiyey
:)
Bahut khoob Waah Waah Naheed Saahibah
Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2005 5:40 am
by Abdullah Nazir
MuHtarami
NAJM Saahib
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi. Saare ashAar bahut hii achche heiN jin ke liye meri daad aur mubaarakbaad haazir hei.
Baz loagaoN kaa khayaal hei ke aapke matleAh kii tarah jab qaafiyaoN meiN mumaacilat houti hei jaise "bikhkharna" aur "bharnaa" to ghazal ke doosre ashAar bhii yeh paabundi aayed houti hei ke her qaafiye meiN "harnaa" hounaa zaroori hei. Patah nahiN unkaa khayaal kahaaN tak saHeeH hei.
Apak Mukhlis,
Nazir.