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TARAHI GHAZAL(Guz.2), Abdulqayyum Sahil, Jeddah.
Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2005 7:11 pm
by abdulqayyum sahil
MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
Ahbab-e-MeHfil,
Aadaab o Tasleemaat,
Guzarish No.2 ke TaraHi misreA per apni ghazal lekar Haazir houaa hooN. Ummeed ke aap apni giraNqadr aaraa se navaaz kar shukriyah adaa karne ka mauqaA denge.
Khair Andesh,
Sahil.
Bahut khoob Sahil Saahib
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 12:27 pm
by Abdullah Nazir
MuHtarami
Sahil Saahib
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
Aapki ghazal behad pasand aayi. Saare ke saare ahsAaar bahut khoob heiN. Meri daad aur mubaarbad qubool keejiye is kaamyab kaavish per.
Patah nahIn aajkal tabsirah karne waalaoN (jin meiN maiN khud bhii shaamil hooN) is qadar jamood kiyooN aagaayaa hei. Agar tafseeli tabsirah nah kar paayeN tou aik do saTr tou likh sakte heiN.!!!
YahN tak keh apni takhleeqaat per dii houi comments kaa javaab dene meiN bhi taksul!!!
Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.