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:: baal-e-jibreel jal na jaaye kaheeN ::
Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 8:23 pm
by Star Mind
Yaaran-e-anjuman, aadaab !
aaj aek a'rSa baa'd aap kii Khidmat meiN apnii aek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath Haazir hooN, ummeed hai k apnii naaqidaana raaye se navaazeN ge!
shukriya
:: Urdu Version ::
:: Roman Version ::
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zulf kii raat Dhal na jaaye kaheeN !
yeh balaa sar se Tal na jaaye kaheeN !
2.
i'shq ki rut badal na jaaye kaheeN !
Gham hi dil se nikal na jaaye kaheeN !
3.
dil ke jaNgal meiN subH hone tak
raat mujh ko nigal na jaaye kaheeN !
4.
aarzoo ke HaseeN khilonoN se
tifluk-e-dil behal na jaaye kaheeN !
5.
josh hai, jazba hai, javaanii hai
Husn ka jaado chal na jaaye kaheeN !
6.
kar to looN un se guftgoo laiken
dil zabaaN se phisal na jaaye kaheeN !
7.
kushtagaan-e-Gham-e-zamaana par
a'aashiqii haath mal na jaaye kaheeN !
8.
lab pe hai daastaan-e-i'shq :Zia:
baal-e-jibreel jal na jaaye kaheeN !
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Zia Baloch
Re: :: baal-e-jibreel jal na jaaye kaheeN ::
Posted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 10:19 am
by m.naeem.sameer
Star Mind wrote: Yaaran-e-anjuman, aadaab !
aaj aek a'rSa baa'd aap kii Khidmat meiN apnii aek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath Haazir hooN, ummeed hai k apnii naaqidaana raaye se navaazeN ge!
shukriya
:: Urdu Version ::
:: Roman Version ::
1.
zulf kii raat Dhal na jaaye kaheeN !
yeh balaa sar se Tal na jaaye kaheeN !
2.
i'shq ki rut badal na jaaye kaheeN !
Gham hi dil se nikal na jaaye kaheeN !
3.
dil ke jaNgal meiN subH hone tak
raat mujh ko nigal na jaaye kaheeN !
4.
aarzoo ke HaseeN khilonoN se
tifluk-e-dil behal na jaaye kaheeN !
5.
josh hai, jazba hai, javaanii hai
Husn ka jaado chal na jaaye kaheeN !
6.
kar to looN un se guftgoo laiken
dil zabaaN se phisal na jaaye kaheeN !
7.
kushtagaan-e-Gham-e-zamaana par
a'aashiqii haath mal na jaaye kaheeN !
8.
lab pe hai daastaan-e-i'shq :Zia:
baal-e-jibreel jal na jaaye kaheeN !
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Zia Baloch
aadaab Zia bhaii
bohat khoob Zia SaaHib bohat khoob. Khaaksaar ki jaanib se daad HaaZir hai qabool kijiye.
Sameer
Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 1:26 pm
by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar
moHtaram Biradaram Z^iya balaoch SaaHib 
! :rose
Aap kee tazah Ghazal dekhee jo keh aap ke makhSooS andaaz aor jawaaN fikr sooch kee aae'inah daar hai. mujh~e akcar ta'ajub hotaa hai keh aap kee maadaree zabaan z^aahir hai keh :Balaochee: hee ho gee. aor ghar kaa maHool qabeelah ke rasm-o-riwaaj a'adaat-o-at^waar bhee yaqeena" apne khit^t^e ya'nee Balochistaan se muta'aliqah hee hooN gee. lekin is sab batooN ke bawajood urdu se raGhbat aor khuSuSa" urdu shae'eree se walehanah muhabbat aor a'qeedat kaa honaa bazaat-e-khud aek mu'jizah hai.
kalam khubSurat aor dilkash hai. meree dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye.
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
Re: :: baal-e-jibreel jal na jaaye kaheeN ::
Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 9:05 pm
by Star Mind
m.naeem.sameer wrote:Star Mind wrote: Yaaran-e-anjuman, aadaab !
aaj aek a'rSa baa'd aap kii Khidmat meiN apnii aek taaza tareen Ghazal ke saath Haazir hooN, ummeed hai k apnii naaqidaana raaye se navaazeN ge!
shukriya
:: Urdu Version ::
:: Roman Version ::
1.
zulf kii raat Dhal na jaaye kaheeN !
yeh balaa sar se Tal na jaaye kaheeN !
2.
i'shq ki rut badal na jaaye kaheeN !
Gham hi dil se nikal na jaaye kaheeN !
3.
dil ke jaNgal meiN subH hone tak
raat mujh ko nigal na jaaye kaheeN !
4.
aarzoo ke HaseeN khilonoN se
tifluk-e-dil behal na jaaye kaheeN !
5.
josh hai, jazba hai, javaanii hai
Husn ka jaado chal na jaaye kaheeN !
6.
kar to looN un se guftgoo laiken
dil zabaaN se phisal na jaaye kaheeN !
7.
kushtagaan-e-Gham-e-zamaana par
a'aashiqii haath mal na jaaye kaheeN !
8.
lab pe hai daastaan-e-i'shq :Zia:
baal-e-jibreel jal na jaaye kaheeN !
...........................................................
Zia Baloch
aadaab Zia bhaii
bohat khoob Zia SaaHib bohat khoob. Khaaksaar ki jaanib se daad HaaZir hai qabool kijiye.
Sameer
Sameer bhaa'ii, w/salaam :)
yeh aap ki maHabbat aur aap kaa Husn-e-nazar hai ! nehaayat mamnoon hooN ! shukriya
Zia Baloch