Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:[align=center]moHtaram Biradaram Haamid SaaHib Assalam-o-alikum!

muzaffar bhaaii saahib

sunaiye kaese haiN aap?

al hamdulillah....khariyyat say haiN......aur aap?

Is baar to gaoyaa aap ke asha'aar ne khanah-e-dil meN aek t^ufaan saa uThaa diya hai. bala kee barjastagee zabaan-o-bayaan kee ra'anaee tarakeeb-o-shustagee aesee haiN keh muNh se be ikhteyaar Waah Waah aese kalemaat nikalte haiN.

al hamdulillah...........

taSawwuf kaa woh partao jo aap kee shaae'ree kaa maaHaSal aor meHwar hai. in asha'aar meN zeyaadah gehra aor jaazib-e-naz^ar ho geya hai. aap ne Ghazal ke peraaeY meN taSawwuf kee jo HaseeN eHsaas paedah farma diya hai. bilaashubah is kaa acar der paa aor zehnooN ko roHaanee laZZatooN se hamkinaar kartaa rahe gaa. kalam meN aek aesee walehanah fiZ^aa ka eHsaas qaaree ko sarshaaree-o-sarmastee meN Dubo detaa hai. mujheY ummeed hai keh aane walaa waqt aap kee ra'naee-e-kheyaal aor nishaat^-e-rooH kaa gehraa acar qubool kareY gaa.

aap ka khuloos,aapka pyaar,aapkay jazbaat,aapkay paakeezah khayaalaat,aapki baylaus khidmatay khalq,aapki baybaaki aur aapkaY andaazay bayaan nay hum per bahut gahra acar chora hai.

ALLAH(SBHNWT) aap per apni baarishay rehmat naazil karay.aameen.

jahaaN say gum sharaafat hau gayee hai
'ajab duniya ki haalat hau gayee hai

Bohot khub Waah Waah!
bahut bahut shukriya
yazeediyyat say nafrat hau gayee hai
husainiyyat say ulfat hau gayee hai

Kiya kehne!
bahut bahut shukriya

bhulaa kar hukmay sarkaaray do aalam(sawaw)
zaleelo khaar ummat hau gayee hai

Bohot khoob Waah Waah lajawab she'er ho geya hai. is par jitnee bhee daad pesh kee jae so kam ho gee. Waa!
bahut bahut shukriya.jazakallah

bahut pyaasa hai ahmed(sawaw)ka nawaasah(a.s)
kudaaya kya qiyaamat hau gayee hai

Bohot khoob! Waah!
bahut bahut shukriya


yazeedoN say hussaini hi ladayngay
'ayaaN ab yeh haqeeqat hau gayee hai

Waah!
bahut bahut shukriya


yazeediyyat mitaana aaj haamid
zamaanay ki zaroorat hau gayee hai

Bohot khoob Waah Waah Kiya kehne
bahut bahut shukriya!


meree jaanib se is khubSurat kalam par dilee daad qubool keejiye.
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar[/align]

jawaid badauni wrote:yazeediyyat mitaana aaj haamid
zamaanay ki zaroorat hau gayee hai

Azeezi Haamid Saahab aadaab
Assalaam o alikum
jawaid bhaaii sahib

aapki Ghazal dekhi jo aap ke maKhsoos rung meN hai.

zahay naseeb.......


mundarja bala sher meN kya achchee baat kahi hai apne. fikr nah kijiye SaaHab ek yazeediyyat ko miTane wala bus aane hi waala hai "insha Allah". ab yeh hamara naSeeb hum uski ziyarat kar sakeN aur hamara shumar uskey naasiroN meN ho.

insha allah.....

Ghazal per meri dad qubool kijiyega.

aapki daad hamaaray liye sanad hai mohtaram

muKhliS
Jawaid