• ChuNd ashAAr "Jauhar Badauni MarHoom"

Posted: **Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:47 am**

dosto! salam qubool kijiye

aaj phir Jahuhar Sahab ke chund ashAAr yaad aaye haiN magar
is baar mukammal ghazal nahiN bhej sakta jis ke lie maAzrat
Khuwaah hooN. ummid hai in ashAAr ko pasaNd farmayeNge
aur apni aara se nawazeNge.

aapka apna,

Jawaid Badauni

deed us jalwa.e be ruNg ki mushkil tou nahiN
dekhna yeh hai nazar parda.e Haaiil tou nahiN

ek dil hi Gham.e dauraN se bacha paayaa tha
aap ki nazr hai, go aap ke qaabil tou nahiN

bazm.e maataam meN nah rakh apni nigaaheN neechee
log socheNge kahiN tou mira qatil tou nahiN

itni surKhi tou nah thee runge Hina meN pahle
dekhna Khoon.e tamanna kahiN shamil tou nahiN

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(baaqi aaindah)

Posted: **Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:17 pm**

Jawaid sahab aadaab

in ash'aar ke liye bhii be-shaakhtaa muNh se wa..h hii nikaltii hai....kyaa khoob ash'aar kahe haiN ''Jauhar'' sahab ne....ab to inkaa aour bhii kalaam paRh ne kii tamanna baRhtii jaatii hai...ummiid hai aap jald hii inke maziid kalam se bhii roo-b-roo karvaayeiNge....

bahut-bahut shukriyaah janaab

nachiiz
balvinder

Posted: **Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:13 pm**

balvinder wrote:Jawaid sahab aadaab

in ash'aar ke liye bhii be-shaakhtaa muNh se wa..h hii nikaltii hai....kyaa khoob ash'aar kahe haiN ''Jauhar'' sahab ne....ab to inkaa aour bhii kalaam paRh ne kii tamanna baRhtii jaatii hai...ummiid hai aap jald hii inke maziid kalam se bhii roo-b-roo karvaayeiNge....

bahut-bahut shukriyaah janaab

nachiiz
balvinder

Dear Balvinder Ji,

Kahte haiN heere ki qadr sirf jauhree hi jaanta hai. aap ne in ashAAr per apni aara bheji mujhe bohat achcha laga warnah aaj tak yeh yahaN "un-noticed" hi paRe thEy. Bohat bohat shukriya. aap ki Khidmat meN :Jauhar: SaHab ka mazeed kalam jald hi irsaal karooNga.

Khoosh raheN!

apka apna
Jawaid