yeh dunyaa maiN ne Thukraayee bohat hai!
Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 6:44 am
taqreeb-e-Ghazal
Haal hee meN Dallas (Texas, USA) ke ek mushaa,i'reh meN janab :Wasim: Barelavi kaa ek miSra' ba-t^aur-e-t^araH tajweez kiyaa gayaa:
:yeh dunyaa maiN ne Thukraayee bohat hai:
maiN ne bhee is meM fikr kee aur apnee Ghazal pesh kar rahaa hooN. is meN daanistah Molana :Hasrat: Mohani ke ek she'r se istifaadah kiyaa gayaa hai, bal.k yooN kehnaa ziyaadah SaHeeH hai keh un ke maZ^moon ko is Ghazal kee zameen aur beHr meN adaa karne kee kosish kee gayee hai. Molana kaa she'r hai:
naheeN aatee jo yaad un kee to barsoN tak naheeN aatee
magar jab yaad aate haiN to akcar yaad aate haiN
yeh waZ^aaHat is liYe Z^arooree hai keh kaheeN mujh par :sarqeh: kaa ilzaam nah lag jaaYe!
ab aap Ghazal dekhiYe. aap kee raaYe aur Khayaalaat kaa intiz^aar rahe gaa. shukriyah!
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GHAZAL
mire jab bhee qareeb aayee bohat hai
:yeh dunyaa maiN ne Thukraayee bohat hai!:
maiN samjhotaa to kar looN zindagee se
magar z^aalim yeh har-jaayee bohat hai!
tumheN sarshaaree-e-manzil mubaarak!
hameN yeh aablah-paayee bohat hai
kahaaN maiN aur kahaaN teree tamannaa!
magar yeh dil! keh saudaayee bohat hai!
balaa se gar naheeN suntaa hai koyee
majaal-o-taab-e-goyaa,ee bohat hai!
miree rindee ba-raNg-e-paarsaayee
Hareef-e-Khauf-e-ruswaayee bohat hai!
maiN Hasrat-aashnaa-e-aarzoo hooN
miree Gham se shanaasaayee bohat hai
:nah aayee yaad to barsoN nah aayee
magar jab aayee to aayee bohat hai!:
maiN Khud ko DhooNDtaa hooN anjuman meN
mujhe eHsaas-e-tanhaayee bohat hai!
zamaane ko shikaayat hai yeh :Sarwar:
keh tujh meN boo-e-Khudraayee bohat hai!
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Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar:
Haal hee meN Dallas (Texas, USA) ke ek mushaa,i'reh meN janab :Wasim: Barelavi kaa ek miSra' ba-t^aur-e-t^araH tajweez kiyaa gayaa:
:yeh dunyaa maiN ne Thukraayee bohat hai:
maiN ne bhee is meM fikr kee aur apnee Ghazal pesh kar rahaa hooN. is meN daanistah Molana :Hasrat: Mohani ke ek she'r se istifaadah kiyaa gayaa hai, bal.k yooN kehnaa ziyaadah SaHeeH hai keh un ke maZ^moon ko is Ghazal kee zameen aur beHr meN adaa karne kee kosish kee gayee hai. Molana kaa she'r hai:
naheeN aatee jo yaad un kee to barsoN tak naheeN aatee
magar jab yaad aate haiN to akcar yaad aate haiN
yeh waZ^aaHat is liYe Z^arooree hai keh kaheeN mujh par :sarqeh: kaa ilzaam nah lag jaaYe!
ab aap Ghazal dekhiYe. aap kee raaYe aur Khayaalaat kaa intiz^aar rahe gaa. shukriyah!
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GHAZAL
mire jab bhee qareeb aayee bohat hai
:yeh dunyaa maiN ne Thukraayee bohat hai!:
maiN samjhotaa to kar looN zindagee se
magar z^aalim yeh har-jaayee bohat hai!
tumheN sarshaaree-e-manzil mubaarak!
hameN yeh aablah-paayee bohat hai
kahaaN maiN aur kahaaN teree tamannaa!
magar yeh dil! keh saudaayee bohat hai!
balaa se gar naheeN suntaa hai koyee
majaal-o-taab-e-goyaa,ee bohat hai!
miree rindee ba-raNg-e-paarsaayee
Hareef-e-Khauf-e-ruswaayee bohat hai!
maiN Hasrat-aashnaa-e-aarzoo hooN
miree Gham se shanaasaayee bohat hai
:nah aayee yaad to barsoN nah aayee
magar jab aayee to aayee bohat hai!:
maiN Khud ko DhooNDtaa hooN anjuman meN
mujhe eHsaas-e-tanhaayee bohat hai!
zamaane ko shikaayat hai yeh :Sarwar:
keh tujh meN boo-e-Khudraayee bohat hai!
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Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar: