mudaton roya karengy jam w pemana mujhy

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mudaton roya karengy jam w pemana mujhy

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aik ghazal ly kar hazir hua hon

umeed hay ahbaab ko pasand aaygi
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جناب عارف نسیم فیضی صاحب
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آپ کا برنگِ جگر رنگِ تغزل بیحد پسبد آیا۔ آپ کی یہ غزل قدیم و جدید اسالیبِ سُخن کا ایک خوشنما امزاج ہے۔میری مخلصانہ داد و تحسین قبول فرمائیں
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Beradaram Arif Naseem Faizi Saheb... Salam o Rehmat !

Masha'Allah aapne Jigar Muradabadi Saheb ke misra e tarha ka HAQ ada kar diya. Bohat hee haseen o jameel :grin: ghazal pesh kii hai aapne.. padh kar bohat lutf aaya. Khaas kar yeh sher mujhe bohat pasand aaya...

Ek Musht-e-Khaak se Badh kar Nahin Mera Maquam
Jab talak us Khush Chasm ne Apna Nahin Mana Mujhe

Daad ke dher saare phool pesh-e-khidmat hain janaab... Qobool kiziye...!!

aapka pana,

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Aarif bhai.. Bahut khub
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muhtaram Barqi Sahib, Naseemi Sahib or BAlgami Saheb

aap sab ka by had shukarguzar hon

ke aap nay aik no warid ko prhny ky liy waqt nikala

or pasand kia

faqat

RF
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