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aap ka hukm sar aaNkhooN par aik nazm kay sath waipis

Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 5:49 pm
by Dawood_Rizwan
doostoo joo sabad adm sahib nay bataya hay mayray forum chooRnay ka sabad woo nahi tha.
aik nazm kay sath janay ka irada multavi kar kay hazir hoon
rizwan

Bahut khoob waah waah

Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 7:41 pm
by Abdullah Nazir

MuHtarami o Azeezi
DAWOOD-RIZWAN Saahib


Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,

Sab se pahle maiN aapka behad shukrguzaar hooN ke aap ne apni hii is site kii forum se munqatiA houne ke khayaal ko multavi kardiyaa. Yehi nahiN balkeh apne khuloos-e-dil kaa izhaar karte houe aek bahut hii dilkash nazm "naye ta'alluq kii ibtedaa hei" se apne chaahne waale doustaoN aur aHbab-e-sukhan ko navaazaa.

Mujhe aapki yeh nazm bahut pasand aayi aur maiN apni daad o teHseen ke saath aapki khidmat meiN Haazir hooN. Ummeed ke aayindah bhii aap apne kalaam se ahl-e-sukhan kii rehnumaayi farmaate rahenge.


Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.


Re: aap ka hukm sar aaNkhooN par aik nazm kay sath waipis

Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 9:26 am
by Mahtab Qadr
Dawood_Rizwan wrote:doostoo joo sabad adm sahib nay bataya hay mayray forum chooRnay ka sabad woo nahi tha.
aik nazm kay sath janay ka irada multavi kar kay hazir hoon
rizwan
bahut khoobsurat nazm ke daad hazir hai, aur yaqeenan aap gayaa waqt to nahi ho ke wapisi na mumkin ho, wapisi ka bhi shukria
mahtab qadr

Re: aap ka hukm sar aaNkhooN par aik nazm kay sath waipis

Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 3:19 pm
by naheedv
Dawood_Rizwan wrote:doostoo joo sabad adm sahib nay bataya hay mayray forum chooRnay ka sabad woo nahi tha.
aik nazm kay sath janay ka irada multavi kar kay hazir hoon
rizwan
Rizwan ji,

ye maiN kyaa sun rahi hooN? aap kahaaN jaane kee teyaari pakaR rahe thay?

aap kee ye nazm paRhee aur paRh kar dil khush ho geyaa, ba'z auqaat hum apne dil kee baat jab kisi aur kee zubaani sunte haiN tau qadre hairaangee hoti hai. aap kee ye nazm mujhe buhat pasaNd aayee hai, iss khobsoorat takhliq par daad paish karti hooN.

mukhliS
Naheed

Re: aap ka hukm sar aaNkhooN par aik nazm kay sath waipis

Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 6:24 pm
by Dawood_Rizwan
naheedv wrote:
Rizwan ji,

ye maiN kyaa sun rahi hooN? aap kahaaN jaane kee teyaari pakaR rahe thay?

aap kee ye nazm paRhee aur paRh kar dil khush ho geyaa, ba'z auqaat hum apne dil kee baat jab kisi aur kee zubaani sunte haiN tau qadre hairaangee hoti hai. aap kee ye nazm mujhe buhat pasaNd aayee hai, iss khobsoorat takhliq par daad paish karti hooN.

mukhliS
Naheed
naheed g main yahi forum nahi balka sab urdu forums koo khuda hafiz kahna ka sooch raha hoon. is ki waja buhat hi zati hay.
woo tamam loog bhi mayray is faislay par khush hoo saktay hain jin kay mutabiq mujay in forums say wo rukhsat kar kay dam lain gay aur khasay ba izzat tarqay par. is kay ilawa kuch dil shikniyan bhi hain joo mujay urdu forums say rukhsat hoonay par uksati hain.
taham aik darkhwast itni sahadeed thi ka main nay filhal apna irada multavi kar dia hay.
rizwan

Re: Bahut khoob waah waah

Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 6:38 pm
by Dawood_Rizwan
Abdullah Nazir wrote:
MuHtarami o Azeezi
DAWOOD-RIZWAN Saahib


Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,

Sab se pahle maiN aapka behad shukrguzaar hooN ke aap ne apni hii is site kii forum se munqatiA houne ke khayaal ko multavi kardiyaa. Yehi nahiN balkeh apne khuloos-e-dil kaa izhaar karte houe aek bahut hii dilkash nazm "naye ta'alluq kii ibtedaa hei" se apne chaahne waale doustaoN aur aHbab-e-sukhan ko navaazaa.

Mujhe aapki yeh nazm bahut pasand aayi aur maiN apni daad o teHseen ke saath aapki khidmat meiN Haazir hooN. Ummeed ke aayindah bhii aap apne kalaam se ahl-e-sukhan kii rehnumaayi farmaate rahenge.


Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.

Nazir sahib main aap ki muhabbatooN ka too shroo din say hi maqrooz hoon. nazm pasand farmanay ka shukriya
rizwan

Re: aap ka hukm sar aaNkhooN par aik nazm kay sath waipis

Posted: Wed Mar 16, 2005 8:20 pm
by Anis Hasan
Dawood_Rizwan wrote:doostoo joo sabad adm sahib nay bataya hay mayray forum chooRnay ka sabad woo nahi tha.
aik nazm kay sath janay ka irada multavi kar kay hazir hoon
rizwan
Mohtaram Dawood" sahib aap ki nazm buhat pasand aayee. Aap nay buhat khubusurti say apnay khayalat ko nazm kiya hai. Saath hi aap ko apnay majmoo'a-e-kalam ki isha'at par bhi mubarakbaad.