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Meri tar o taza ghazal
Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 6:43 pm
by jawaid badauni
Dil pe tou jaise laga rakhkha ho tala maiN ne
Ek armaan bhi dil se na nikaala maiN ne
Mujh se bezaar se lagte haiN wohee bachche aaj
Jin kio ik roz baRe laad se pala maiN ne
Aaj lagta hai ke maiN ne bhee ibaadat ki hai
Ek girte huuwe insaaN ko saNbhala maiN ne
Aa gaya dil meN machalte huuwe jazboN ka Khayal
Jab bhee paani kisee bartan meN ubaala maiN ne
Aaj hi ghar meN andhera hai ziyadah har samt
Aaj hi maNga tha qudrat se ujala maiN ne
Hai ye ghamKhaana tou ghamKhaane ki maanind rahe
Ghar meN rahne diya dewaaroN pe jala maiN ne
Mere ashaar se :Jawaid: gurezaaN haiN buzurg
Jab se sheroN ko naye ruNg meN Dhala maiN ne
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Jawaid Badauni
Re: Meri tar o taza ghazal
Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:45 am
by syed ziauddin naeem
mukrram o mohtaram Jawaid Badayuni sahab.
salam o aadaab,
SUKHANABAD ME.N HAI TUJH SE UJALA BAISHAK
TU NE SHAIRO.N KO NAYE RANG ME.N DHALA BAISHAK.
Aap ki ghazal itni jaandaar hai k filbadeeh aap ki shan me.n mundarja bala shair hogaya.
aaj lagta hai k mai.n ne bhi ibadat ki hai
ek girte huway insaa.n ko sa.nbhala mai.n ne
hai ye ghamkhana tou ghamkhaney ki manand rahe
ghar main rehne diya diwaroun pe jala maiN ne
DIL PE TOU JAISAY LAGA RAKHA HO TALA MAIN NE.....TOU JAISAY...Kia umda istemal farmay aap ne..
Meri dili dad qubool farmaiye aur taza ghazlo.n se nawazte rehye..mujhe ishtiaq rahe ga.
Talib e dua....
SYED ZIAUDDIN NAEEM.
Re: Meri tar o taza ghazal
Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 6:37 am
by jawaid badauni
jawaid badauni wrote:
Dil pe tou jaise laga rakhkha ho tala maiN ne
Ek armaan bhi dil se na nikaala maiN ne
Mujh se bezaar se lagte haiN wohee bachche aaj
Jin kio ik roz baRe laad se pala maiN ne
Aaj lagta hai ke maiN ne bhee ibaadat ki hai
Ek girte huuwe insaaN ko saNbhala maiN ne
Aa gaya dil meN machalte huuwe jazboN ka Khayal
Jab bhee paani kisee bartan meN ubaala maiN ne
Aaj hi ghar meN andhera hai ziyadah har samt
Aaj hi maNga tha qudrat se ujala maiN ne
Hai ye ghamKhaana tou ghamKhaane ki maanind rahe
Ghar meN rahne diya dewaaroN pe jala maiN ne
Mere ashaar se :Jawaid: gurezaaN haiN buzurg
Jab se sheroN ko naye ruNg meN Dhala maiN ne
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Jawaid Badauni
MoHtermee Syed Ziauddin Naeem SaHab
aadaab
Aaj pahli baar aap se guftagoo ka sharaf HaSil ker raha hooN. Aap ki purKhulooS daad ke liye aap ka beHud mamnoon hooN. Main in maHafil meN kalam hameshta bhejta rahta hooN. Insha Allah aaindah bhi HaZiree lagata rahooNga.
MuKhliS
Jawaid
Re: Meri tar o taza ghazal
Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 9:54 am
by sbashwar
Mohtaram Jawaid Badauni Saheb
Aaj lagta hai ke maiN ne bhee ibaadat ki hai
Ek girte huuwe insaaN ko saNbhala maiN ne
bohat khoob.
Aapke ghazal ke asha'ar dil ko cho jate hain.
Dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmayiye.
Mukhlis
Salem Bashwar
Re: Meri tar o taza ghazal
Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:22 pm
by jawaid badauni
sbashwar wrote:Mohtaram Jawaid Badauni Saheb
Aaj lagta hai ke maiN ne bhee ibaadat ki hai
Ek girte huuwe insaaN ko saNbhala maiN ne
bohat khoob.
Aapke ghazal ke asha'ar dil ko cho jate hain.
Dili daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmayiye.
Mukhlis
Salem Bashwar
Azeezi Salem Bashwar Saahab
Bohat bohat shukriyah.
Khair andesh,
Jawaid