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abhi to..
Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 11:13 am
by Aanchal
Assalamalikum
Re: abhi to..
Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2012 11:28 pm
by Tanwir Phool
bahut Khoob
Doosray miSray maiN "to" ziyaadah hai
aur "teri" ki jagah "tiri" durust hai.BaharHaal
Is Khoob Soorat paishkash kaa bahut bahut
shukriya, daad aur mubaarak baad qabool keeji'ey
MuKhliS:Tanwir Phool , http://rtbot.net/Tanwir_Phool
Re: abhi to..
Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2012 5:27 pm
by Aanchal
mujhay aik web pay mila yeh shair to aisay hi design kar dia :--d
shukria shair ki mistakes theek karnay ka :--)