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Ghazal-Naya suraj ubhartaa jaa rahaa hai-Tanwir Phool
Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 9:48 pm
by Tanwir Phool
Re: Ghazal-Naya suraj ubhartaa jaa rahaa hai-Tanwir Phool
Posted: Wed Aug 21, 2013 7:52 pm
by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar
MoHtaram Tanweer AHmad Phool Sb 
mizaaj Giraami, aap kee nae'ee taraHee Ghazal "Neya suraj ubharta jaa raha hai" dekhnee kee taofeeq milee kiya kehne ihaayat u'mdah asha'aar haiN, sabhee asha'aar dilkash aor pur maghaz haiN, aesi khubSurat jazbaat nigaari jis meN (Rhytham and Rhyme) ka baahami milaap ashaar ko mutarannum bana raha hai be micaal hai, meree dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye. =D>
ilm e Sarf ke Hawalah se aap ne jis nuqtah kee jaanib ishaarah kiya hai ya'nee :uSool e imaalah: jis ke teHet alif yaa :haaeY: hooZ ko baRee Ye se badla jata hai is silsilah meN maiN aap se mutafiq hoN, 
Wassalam
Muzaffar
Re: Ghazal-Naya suraj ubhartaa jaa rahaa hai-Tanwir Phool
Posted: Fri Aug 23, 2013 1:07 pm
by sbashwar
Ghazal ka har sher qabil-e-daad hai.
Re: Ghazal-Naya suraj ubhartaa jaa rahaa hai-Tanwir Phool
Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 7:37 am
by Tanwir Phool
Bahut bahut Shukriyaa Bhai Muzaffar Sb. aur Bhai Bashwar Sb.
Aap donoN ki maHabbat par tah-e-dil se mamnoon hooN.
Hamaishaa du'aaoN maiN yaad rakhi'ey 
Sipaas guzaar : Tanwir Phool