sir,
asak
i m ataching here, a short nazm for the members of the bazm,hoping they will award the same with their comment & will oblige me,thanks.
yours,
dr. hanif tarin

MoHtaram Hanif SaHib Adab!

MeHfil meN tashreef aawari ke liye shukriyah, Nazm pasand aai dilkash kheyal hai nazm ka ikhtiSaar bhi dilpasand hai mujhe ummeed hai keh aap yooN hi apni degar takhliqaat se bhi nawazete raheN ge.

Wassalam
Muzaffar Ahmed Muzaffar.

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