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aankheN
Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 7:31 pm
by tahira Masood
sabki Khdmat meN salaam
aik adna si kaavish Haazir hai. apni aara se nawaiy gaa.
wassalam
Re: aankheN
Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 8:26 pm
by Mahtab Qadr
tahira Masood wrote:sabki Khdmat meN salaam
aik adna si kaavish Haazir hai. apni aara se nawaiy gaa.
wassalam
wah waah bahut khoob achi aNkheiN haiN aapki :) waise sher no. 2 mai agar yoN karleiN to ziada munasib hoga
raah dikhlaa ke loot leti haiN
kisqadar beamaan aNkheiN haiN
kioN ke eimaan ka qafia yahaN wazan ke aitebaar bazaher suit nahi karta agar koi gunjaishe asatiza nikal laiN to dosri baat hai. baharhal ye aik raye hai .
shukria
Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 8:31 pm
by waqar_masood
raah dikhlaa ke loot leti haiN
kisqadar beamaan aNkheiN haiN
wahh.....wah waah ja pori ghazl ki jaan meray khayal mein yeh sheer hay ..buhut acchay , mujh haqeer say maddah ki janib say daad wusool kejay ..
waqar masood
Re: aankheN
Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 12:46 pm
by tahira Masood
Mahtab Qadr wrote:tahira Masood wrote:sabki Khdmat meN salaam
aik adna si kaavish Haazir hai. apni aara se nawaiy gaa.
wassalam
wah waah bahut khoob achi aNkheiN haiN aapki :) waise sher no. 2 mai agar yoN karleiN to ziada munasib hoga
raah dikhlaa ke loot leti haiN
kisqadar beamaan aNkheiN haiN
kioN ke eimaan ka qafia yahaN wazan ke aitebaar bazaher suit nahi karta agar koi gunjaishe asatiza nikal laiN to dosri baat hai. baharhal ye aik raye hai .
shukria
Mahtab Bhaii
salaam
shukeriyah aap kaa.
aur aap ki tajveez ach lagee.
Jazakomullah.
Khush rehiaye.
wassalam
Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 12:50 pm
by tahira Masood
waqar_masood wrote:raah dikhlaa ke loot leti haiN
kisqadar beamaan aNkheiN haiN
wahh.....wah waah ja pori ghazl ki jaan meray khayal mein yeh sheer hay ..buhut acchay , mujh haqeer say maddah ki janib say daad wusool kejay ..
waqar masood
Slaam Waqar bhaii
Waqar mere bete kaa naam bhi hai. Uskaa pooraa naam bhi Waqar Masood hai. 
aji aap bohat mo'at bar heN aur aap ki raaey bhi. aap ko ghzal kaa yeh sh'er pasand aaya. khushi huee.
khush rehiay.
wassalam
Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 2:02 pm
by najma
tahira sahiba
apki ye kaawish bhi achi hay, zara alfaaz kaheeN kaheeN bab rahay haiN.asaatizah kiraam apki rah-numaaee farmaeingay.maiN to sirf waah waah hi kar saktii hooN.
daad qubool kijiye
Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:11 am
by tahira Masood
najma wrote:tahira sahiba
apki ye kaawish bhi achi hay, zara alfaaz kaheeN kaheeN bab rahay haiN.asaatizah kiraam apki rah-numaaee farmaeingay.maiN to sirf waah waah hi kar saktii hooN.
daad qubool kijiye
shukeriya Najmah ji
aap ki mamnoon hoN
khsuh rehiye