dastk say khali rat ( aik taza treen nazm )
Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 3:49 pm
aziz doostoo aik bilkul taza nazm kay sath hazir hooN. is bar aik maqsad bhi is nazm koo post karnay ka hay. aap main say aksar doost muj say azad nazm kay baray main sawal kartay hain. jis kay baray main mukhtalif mawaqaay par izhar bhi kar chuka hoon. alawa azeeN aik forum par is baray main chand satraiN bhi tehreer kar chuka hooN. irada hay ka an qreeb aik mufassil mazmoon bhi aap loogooN ki khidmat main paish karooN ga (inshallah )
is nazm kay hawalay say mujay arz ya karna hay ka khas toor par woo doost joo azad nazm koo samjhna chahtay hain woo is nazm par bashamool is kay unwan kay apnay khiyalat ka izhar farmain ka woo is nazm main kia patay haiN . yani is ka mazmoon, is kay awzan aur misroon ki tarteeb main unhain kia bat nazar aaee. is kay ilawa khiyal ki tarseel main unhain kahaN kahaN rikawaT mehsoos hooee ya woo kia samjhay yar phir main apany khiyal koo kahan kahan paish karnay say aajiz raha.
is ziman main ya darkhwast hay ka aap apni zati aara say niwaziay. aapas main besh say agar guraiz mumkin koo too mujay ziada sahoolat hoo gi. neez main apni har mumkin kooshish karoon ga ka sab ki tasali infradi toor par jawab day kar karoon. agar kuch ahbab kay sawalooN main yaksaniat hoo gi too main mushtarka toor par jawab doon ga.
aap aik doosaray ki aara koo zaroor paRhay. takah aap ya jan sakain kah deegar ahbab nay is nazm koo kasay concieve kia hay.
ikhtlaf a raay say bilkul guraiz mat kijay ga ka seekhnay kay amal main ya buhat kar aamad hoota hay.
kisi aur ki bajay apni nazm paish karna ka maqsad bhi yahi hay kah har kisim kay ikhtilafat mayray lay hoon gay aur mujay ikhtlaf say koee ikhtilaf nahi
aap ka doost
rizwan
is nazm kay hawalay say mujay arz ya karna hay ka khas toor par woo doost joo azad nazm koo samjhna chahtay hain woo is nazm par bashamool is kay unwan kay apnay khiyalat ka izhar farmain ka woo is nazm main kia patay haiN . yani is ka mazmoon, is kay awzan aur misroon ki tarteeb main unhain kia bat nazar aaee. is kay ilawa khiyal ki tarseel main unhain kahaN kahaN rikawaT mehsoos hooee ya woo kia samjhay yar phir main apany khiyal koo kahan kahan paish karnay say aajiz raha.
is ziman main ya darkhwast hay ka aap apni zati aara say niwaziay. aapas main besh say agar guraiz mumkin koo too mujay ziada sahoolat hoo gi. neez main apni har mumkin kooshish karoon ga ka sab ki tasali infradi toor par jawab day kar karoon. agar kuch ahbab kay sawalooN main yaksaniat hoo gi too main mushtarka toor par jawab doon ga.
aap aik doosaray ki aara koo zaroor paRhay. takah aap ya jan sakain kah deegar ahbab nay is nazm koo kasay concieve kia hay.
ikhtlaf a raay say bilkul guraiz mat kijay ga ka seekhnay kay amal main ya buhat kar aamad hoota hay.
kisi aur ki bajay apni nazm paish karna ka maqsad bhi yahi hay kah har kisim kay ikhtilafat mayray lay hoon gay aur mujay ikhtlaf say koee ikhtilaf nahi
aap ka doost
rizwan
