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by poet
Fri Sep 30, 2005 6:16 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: pooch`iYe mire dil se intiz^aar kaa a'alam!
Replies: 8
Views: 580

Re: pooch`iYe mire dil se intiz^aar kaa a'alam!

yaaraan-e-meHfil: aadaab-o-tasleemaat! ph`ir mujh`e deedah-e-tar yaad aayaa! dil jigar tishnah-e-faryaad aayaa! (Ghalib) makaan kyaa badlaa Mall kee woh sair hee Khwaab-o-Khayaal ho kar reh gayee jis ne jaane kitnee SubHeN taabindah kee th`eeN! lekin yaadoN ko koyee kaise rok saktaa hai? aur yeh bh ...
by poet
Thu Sep 29, 2005 5:50 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii(taaza ghazal)
Replies: 20
Views: 1706

Re: aoa

shummu ji buhat khoob. umda ghazal hay. shukra hay ka aap nay matlay chooR kar ghazal likhna shorro ki. aap nay buhat taraqi ki hay. mashallah. bay maza rat ka too jawab nahi buhat umda ghazal hay buhat si dad poet Bahut bahut nawazish POET jee..aap ki baaton se aisa lag raha hai kahin aap woh to ...
by poet
Tue Sep 27, 2005 12:19 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: nigaah Khud pah jo Daalee to yeh huwaa ma'loom!
Replies: 6
Views: 374

aoa

janab a raz sahib aap ki ghazal paRhi. buhat umda kalam hay. ji too chahta hay ka har sher par alag alag tabsira karain. lakin main kahan aur ya wabal kahan. har sher tawajoo khainchta hay. la maloom agarchah darust tarqeeb nahi samjhi jati. lakin is main aisi kamal muharat kay sath aap nay ya ...
by poet
Tue Sep 27, 2005 11:50 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: shab-e-hijr merii azaaboN meiN guzrii(taaza ghazal)
Replies: 20
Views: 1706

aoa

shummu ji buhat khoob. umda ghazal hay.
shukra hay ka aap nay matlay chooR kar ghazal likhna shorro ki. aap nay buhat taraqi ki hay. mashallah.
bay maza rat ka too jawab nahi
buhat umda ghazal hay
buhat si dad
poet
by poet
Tue Sep 27, 2005 11:44 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: :: Mere maHboob (naz^m)::
Replies: 8
Views: 513

aoa

zia sahib mashallah buhat umda nazm hay.
kia khoob talmeehat aur istarat istimal kay hain.
dad qabool farmain
poet
by poet
Fri Sep 02, 2005 7:27 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: ghazal: shaam khiRkiyoN se
Replies: 4
Views: 437

muhtarma naheed sahiba adab aap ki taza ghazal paRhi hasb a mamool kiyalat taqatwar hain. taqreebaan tamam ashar hi achay lagay. lakin naheed sahiba is ghazal main aik technical khami hay ka is nazm main qafiya nahi hay. ham jantay hain ka aap kia jawab dain gi. lakin woo beharhal ghalt hooga "ti ...
by poet
Fri Sep 02, 2005 7:19 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: aik Nazm: Kashf
Replies: 20
Views: 1385

Re: achchi nazm hei kashf

MuHtaramah Naheed Verk Saahibah, Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aapki nazm meiN markazi khayaal bahut hii dilkash hei. Aazad nazm ke taAalluq se meri apni zaati raaye yeh hei keh usko aek hii beHr meiN hounaa chaahiye macalan aap ne is beHr ko ikhtiyaar kiye: (faa'ilaa'tun .. fa'ilaa'tun... faii'laatun ...
by poet
Fri Aug 26, 2005 9:01 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: aik Nazm: Kashf
Replies: 20
Views: 1385

muhtrama naheed sahiba ham aik kam ilm insan hain. hamaray ilm main aap ka bataya howa wazn nahi. albatta aik rukn kay izafay kay sath nazm mufaeelun main aajati hay. shayad ham chand rooz main aap kay batay howay wazn kay baray main kuch kahain. aik aur bat hamian dar hay ka aap joo hamain smajah ...
by poet
Thu Aug 25, 2005 5:31 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: aik Nazm: Kashf
Replies: 20
Views: 1385

joo chahay aap ka husn a karishma saz karay
by poet
Thu Aug 25, 2005 9:47 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: aik Nazm: Kashf
Replies: 20
Views: 1385

i dont under estimate any one. but mostly over estimate. so if u r sure u know me then u may keep ur confidence. this does not make any difference to me. but i am sure u dont know me as we have never been across before. and i was use to use different id. but this discussion is useless as we r ...
by poet
Wed Aug 24, 2005 6:17 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: aik Nazm: Kashf
Replies: 20
Views: 1385

i dont under estimate any one. but mostly over estimate. so if u r sure u know me then u may keep ur confidence. this does not make any difference to me. but i am sure u dont know me as we have never been across before. and i was use to use different id. but this discussion is useless as we r ...
by poet
Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:01 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: samagayaa suraj -aik taza ghazal
Replies: 16
Views: 950

wah wah mahtab qadr sahib
by poet
Wed Aug 24, 2005 12:31 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: aik Nazm: Kashf
Replies: 20
Views: 1385

naheed ji adab. nazm paRhna hamisha hamain buhat acha lagta hay aurba zum a khaish ham nazm kay achay parikh bhi hain. ham aap ki nazm ka tajziya karna chah rahay thay. hamaray mushhiday kay mutabiq tamama urdu forums par nazm kahnay waly sirf doo teen loog hi hain. aur app ki soorat main un main ...
by poet
Tue Aug 23, 2005 12:00 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: aik Nazm: Kashf
Replies: 20
Views: 1385

naheed ji adab. nazm paRhna hamisha hamain buhat acha lagta hay aurba zum a khaish ham nazm kay achay parikh bhi hain. ham aap ki nazm ka tajziya karna chah rahay thay. hamaray mushhiday kay mutabiq tamama urdu forums par nazm kahnay waly sirf doo teen loog hi hain. aur app ki soorat main un main ...
by poet
Thu Jul 28, 2005 9:41 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: Aek taazah Ghazal on 26th July, 2005. Abdullah Nazir.
Replies: 5
Views: 576

Re: Aek taazah Ghazal on 26th July, 2005. Abdullah Nazir.

MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen Arbaab-e-MeHfil aur Ahbaab-e-sukhan, Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, Aek taazah ghazal pesh karrahaa hooN ummeed ke pasand aayegi. GHAZAL Roman meiN: 1- pesh kyaa aayi thii ik rouz safar kii uljhan reh gaiee saath mire shaam o saHar kii uljhan 2- dil se jaataa hii nahiN souz-e ...