samagayaa suraj -aik taza ghazal

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Wed Aug 24, 2005 9:30 am

aik aur taza ghazal ..

poet · Post by **poet** » Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:01 pm

wah wah mahtab qadr sahib

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 6:48 am

shukria Shayer sahib
Mahtab Qadr

ehsaas · Post by **ehsaas** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 9:31 am

janab

buhut khubsoorat ghazal kahee aap nay , mubarak ho,

Post by **zmufti** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 6:28 pm

mahataab sahib
buhat khub
thanks for sharing
regards
zmufti

Post by **Star Mind** » Sun Aug 28, 2005 8:23 pm

maashaa Allah !

janaab-e-sarfaraaz bhai , aadaab

Huzoor ! aap ki Ghazal bhi hamesha ki tarah A 1 hai ! Khyaalat bhi Khoob haiN, andaaz maiN jiddat bhi hai , zameen bhi dil-chasp aur sone pe suhaaga aap ka munfarid lehja ! mazaa aagayaa janaab ! 2 baar paRhee aap ki ye Haseen-o-jameel Ghazal ! tamaam ash'aar dil ko bhaa gaye !
DheroN daad qabool kejeye ! shukriya

moKhliS :

Zia Baloch

Post by **jawaid badauni** » Mon Aug 29, 2005 5:42 pm

Azeezi Mahtab Qadr Sb.,
Aadaab

Bahut achchee ghazal hai. Meri daad qubool farmaaiyega. Kuch arce qabl maiN ne ek "Suraj namaH" irsaal kiya tha mujhe khooshee hai aap ne bhi aaj ek "Surah namah" inayat farmaya hai.

Ummid hai mizaj bakhair hoNge.

Khair Andesh
Jawaid

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Tue Aug 30, 2005 4:48 pm

Janab
Mahtab Qadr Saahib,

Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,

Hameshah apne doust aHbaab ki ghazlaoN per is liye takheer houjaati hei ke in ke kalaam per phir kisi waqt kuch likhkhaa jaasaktaa hei. Yehi Haalat meri apni ghazal per tabsirah karne waalaoN ko javaab dene meiN bhii houti hei.

Aaj dekhaa tou aapki ghazal achche gehre rangaoN meiN nazar aayi. MaiN ne soucha ke ab mazeed takheer nahiN houni chaahiye.

Aapki ghazal mujhe beHad pasand aayi. Saare ke saare ashAar bahut hii achche heiN.

Is kaamyaab kaavish per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaaiye.
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Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
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Post by **Anmol** » Tue Aug 30, 2005 11:29 pm

Adaab, Mehtaab Sahib!

Hamesha ki tarah munfarid zameen le kar aaye heN aap. Ye ghazal bhi Khoob rahi, Khusoosi taur per matla aur sher#2 behad pasand aaye, DheroN daad pesh hay.

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Wed Aug 31, 2005 1:34 pm

Janaab aapne bhi daad dekar aik khoobsurat ehsaas se nawaza
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

ehsaas wrote:janab

buhut khubsoorat ghazal kahee aap nay , mubarak ho,

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Wed Aug 31, 2005 1:36 pm

Zarqa sahiba
Bahut shukria
khairandaish
Mahtab Qadr

zmufti wrote:mahataab sahib
buhat khub
thanks for sharing
regards
zmufti

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Wed Aug 31, 2005 1:39 pm

Saara sahiba
Tasleemat
Behad khushi huvi aapki is daad aur pazeerai se , bahut bahut shukria
niazmand
Mahtab Qadr

sara_j wrote:mohtaram mahtab sahib,

adaab arz hai.

amaanatein sabhi raaton ki khaa gaya sooraj
huii jo subh andhere chupa gayaa sooraj

wah! bohat zabardast shair hai.

wah! har shair bohat khoob.

har shair paRhne wale ke khayaalat ko
jazb karta hai.......a very deep thought
is hidden within....mujhe tou aisa hi
mehsoos hota hai.

kabhi milo tou aisi berukhi kya hai
ye baat chaand ko ik din suna gayaa sooraj!

awesome!

main tamaam ashaar ko quote nahi kar rahi hoon lekin har shair lajawaab hai....

bohat hi haseen ghazal per dil se daad qubool keejiye.

mukhlis

sara

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Wed Aug 31, 2005 1:42 pm

Bradar e Azeez Zia sahib
salaam e masnoon
aap ki adabnawazi se is pazeerai aur sitayesh ki hi umeed thi. mai behad mashkoor hoN aapka
niazmand
Mahtab Qadr

Star Mind wrote:maashaa Allah !

janaab-e-sarfaraaz bhai , aadaab

Huzoor ! aap ki Ghazal bhi hamesha ki tarah A 1 hai ! Khyaalat bhi Khoob haiN, andaaz maiN jiddat bhi hai , zameen bhi dil-chasp aur sone pe suhaaga aap ka munfarid lehja ! mazaa aagayaa janaab ! 2 baar paRhee aap ki ye Haseen-o-jameel Ghazal ! tamaam ash'aar dil ko bhaa gaye !
DheroN daad qabool kejeye ! shukriya

moKhliS :

Zia Baloch

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Wed Aug 31, 2005 1:45 pm

Jawaid Badauni Saheb
Aadaab
Bahut shukria aap ne ghazal ko pasand farmakar sanad e qubooliat bakshi . bahut zarra nawazi hai janab
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

jawaid badauni wrote:Azeezi Mahtab Qadr Sb.,
Aadaab

Bahut achchee ghazal hai. Meri daad qubool farmaaiyega. Kuch arce qabl maiN ne ek "Suraj namaH" irsaal kiya tha mujhe khooshee hai aap ne bhi aaj ek "Surah namah" inayat farmaya hai.

Ummid hai mizaj bakhair hoNge.

Khair Andesh
Jawaid

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Wed Aug 31, 2005 1:47 pm

Mohatramee Abdullah bhai sahib
salaam e masnoon
Hamesha ki tarah aap se sanad pakar ghazal moatabar ho gai. is aitebaar ke lye behad mashkoor hoN. aapne apni guN nagooN masroofiat ke bawajood is ghazal par nazr e eltefaat se nawaaza jiske lye mai aapka mamnoon o mashkoor hoN.
niazmand
Mahtab Qadr

WEBMASTER wrote:
Janab
Mahtab Qadr Saahib,

Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,

Hameshah apne doust aHbaab ki ghazlaoN per is liye takheer houjaati hei ke in ke kalaam per phir kisi waqt kuch likhkhaa jaasaktaa hei. Yehi Haalat meri apni ghazal per tabsirah karne waalaoN ko javaab dene meiN bhii houti hei.

Aaj dekhaa tou aapki ghazal achche gehre rangaoN meiN nazar aayi. MaiN ne soucha ke ab mazeed takheer nahiN houni chaahiye.

Aapki ghazal mujhe beHad pasand aayi. Saare ke saare ashAar bahut hii achche heiN.

Is kaamyaab kaavish per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaaiye.
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Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
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samagayaa suraj -aik taza ghazal

samagayaa suraj -aik taza ghazal

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