zia saHib

salaam arz hai

janaab ghazal bahot umdah hai, zabaan-o-bayaan ka iste'maal baRay saleeqay se kia gayaa hai, shusta tarz-e-sukhan hai. is kaamiyaab kaawish ke liye meri daad Haazir hai. magar mazmoon aafreeni ki kami kuch kuch meHsoos hui. matla bahot acha hai, lutf aaya paRh ker, us ke ...

moHtaram Haamid saHib

salaam arz hai

aap ne bahot umdah ghazal kahee hai. aur sab se aham baat ye hai ke zameen koi bhi ho aap us per apni aqeedat ke phool khilaa hi dete haiN. ye kalaam-e-mid'Hat qaabil-e-teHseen-o-sitaaish hai.

bahot umdah likha hai, dheiRon daad qubool keejiye

amjad

moHtaram Muzaffar saHib

salaam arz hai

taakheer se javaab dene ke liye maa'zirat. aap ne is qadar pazeeraai farmaayee hai ke adnaa ko aa'laa aur zarray ko aaftaab banaa diya.

tamaam ash'aar ko pasand farmaane aur daad-o-sitaaish se navaazne ke liye maiN aap ka mamnoon-o-mutashakkir hooN.

umeed ...

assalam-o-alaikum

aik taraHi ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai, umeed hai apni aaraa se navaazeN ge :

zeest ke saare maze maine jo paaye ghar se
aik ik kar ke voh rukhsat hue haaye ghar se

gham-e-tanhaai ki aavaaz jo aaye ghar se
aisi soorat meiN to Allaah bachaaye ghar se

she'r kehte hue taari tha ...

mire ash'aar ae Iqbaal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujh ko
mire TooTay hue dil ke ye dard.angaiz naale haiN

zulmat-e-shikva-e-shab se to kahiN behtar tha
apne Hissay ki koi sham'a jalaate jaate

dik ke varaq pe cabt haiN sad mohr-e-daagh-e-ishq
ham karte ZAUQ ishq ka daa'va sanad se haiN

ye misra likh diya kis shokh ne meHraab-e-masjid per
ye naadaaN gir gaye sajday meiN jab vaqt-e-qayaam aaya

Khawar saHib

salaam arz hai

aap ki ghazal pasand aayee. ghazal dekh ker andaaza hota hai ke aap ne kaafi meHnat ki hai.

meri jaanib se daad Haazir hai, qubool farmaaiye.

shukria

Amjad

sara saHiba

Allah subHaanahu wa ta'aala ki Hamd-o-canaa pesh karne ke liye bahot bahot shukria

jazaakillah

bahot umdah kalaam hai

Amjad