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Shummu
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by Shummu » Tue Jan 03, 2006 11:15 am
Salaam ahl-e-bazm..aligarian.com ke ik silsile se muta'assir hoke yahan bhi ek naye silsile ka aaGhaaz kar rahi hoon....ummeed hai aap sab baRhchaRh ke hissa lenge aur is laRi ko kaamyaab banaayenge.....
yahan aap ko maane jaane..naamwar..ustaad shoara ke MAQTE likhne hain...ek baar mein ek hi post kijiyega...shayar ke naam ko highlight zaroor kijiyega bold/italic/underline/quote/capital likh ke....is tarah se tamam ustaad shoara ke "maqte" yahan yakjaa ho jayenge...so aaGhaaz karein
Urdu hai jis ka naam hum hi jaante hain 'Daagh'
Saare jahaan may dhoom hamare zabaaN ki hai
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Tue Jan 03, 2006 2:45 pm
"Hum kahaaN ke daanaa thay kis hunar meiN yaktaa thay
be-sabab houaa Ghalib dushman aasmaaN apnaa".
Nazir.
Zahid Jahangir
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by Zahid Jahangir » Wed Jan 04, 2006 8:11 am
paRhta tha main namaz ki soorat jisse Nadeem
phir yoon howa ke mujh se qaza ho gia woh shakhs
Shummu
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by Shummu » Wed Jan 04, 2006 3:25 pm
na fanaa merii na baqaa merii mujhe ai 'Shakeel' na Dhuu.NDiye
mai.n kisii kaa husn-e-Khayaal huu.N meraa kuchh vujuud-o-adam nahii.n
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Shummu
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by Shummu » Thu Jan 05, 2006 12:15 pm
muddat ke baad dekh ke us shakhsh ko Munir
ik baar dil to dhaRka magar phir sambhal gayaa
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
ummassad
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by ummassad » Fri Jan 06, 2006 7:40 pm
koi ay shakeel puche yh junoon nahi tuu kye hai
ke usi ke hogye hum jo nh hosaka hamara
ummassad
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by ummassad » Fri Jan 06, 2006 7:47 pm
wohi ak kamoush nagma hai SHAKEELjan-e- hasti
jo zuban tak na aaye jo kalaam tak na pohanche
ummassad
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by ummassad » Fri Jan 06, 2006 8:34 pm
fani ham tuu jiteji wo maiyt hai be goor o kafan
gurbat jisko ras na aayi aor watan bhi choot gya
Shummu
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by Shummu » Sat Jan 07, 2006 10:04 pm
Qayaamat yaqeenan qareeb aa rahi hai
Khumar ab to masjid meiN jaane lage haiN
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Sun Jan 08, 2006 2:49 am
aatish yeh kis ki chaah kaa dam maarte hou tum
wo dli-rubaa hei dushman-e-jaaN doust-daar kaa.
Nazir.
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ummassad
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by ummassad » Sat Jan 14, 2006 10:45 pm
muqam FAIZ koi raah main jacha hi nahi
jo kou-e- yaar se nikle tu suu-e- daar chale
Shummu
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by Shummu » Mon Jan 16, 2006 7:23 pm
shehr-e-ehsaas mein pathraoo buhat hai mohsin
dil k sheeshay ko jharokon mein sajaayaa na karo
(mohsin naqvi)
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
ummassad
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by ummassad » Mon Jan 16, 2006 8:31 pm
hijr-e- nabi maiin NOOR hamara raha yh haal
nala kunan rehee tuu kabhi novhager rahe
Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir » Tue Jan 17, 2006 9:26 am
lab hilaaou tou samajh legaa tumhaaraa :Nazir:
"bousah lene kaa sazaawaar dahan kiskaa hei.".
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Nazir.
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ummassad
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by ummassad » Fri Jan 20, 2006 9:12 pm
QATEEL apna muqqader gum se begana agar hota
tuu phir appne parayee hum se pahchane kahan jate