SUBHAAN ALLAH , bahut khoob !
Bahut peyaari ghazal hai
Daad aur dili mubaarakbaad qabool keeji'ey

Mukhlis : Tanwir Phool

http://www.globalurduforum.org/authors/view/485


Assalam o alaikum janab e Tanwir Phool SaaHeb,

Ghazal kee pasandeedgi aur daad ke liYe dil kee gehrahiyooN se aap kee ...

MoHtaramah Zahida Raees Raji SaHeba
:salaam2:

Gar duA’aoN ka saleeqa, tujhe aataa Raaji
Phir tu mushkil tha keh us dar se tuu khaali jatee

Aap iss bazm ke awaleen rukn hain. Aapki umda ghazal par meri daad aur mubarakbaad qubool farmayeN.

Mukhlis
Salem Bashwar

Janab e Salem Bashwar SaaHeb ...

azeezan e bazm,

aadaab o tasleemaat,

ek taveel a'rsay ba'ad meHfil meN aana hoova hai.
parsooN FB par Arshad Mehmood SaaHeb kee Ghazal paRhte paRhte chand asha'ar mujh se bhi sarzad hoove. aap kee adalat meN pesh e Khidmat heN so apnii belaag aaraa aur rehnumayii se mustafeed keejiye ga ...

ARAY WAH SIS YEH BAAT TU MUJHE PATAH HEE NAHEEN THEE :)

Dear Rajii,

bohat din baad apki tehrer dekhi aur khushi hui, aapki ye ghazal

aapki pehli tehreeron se bohat mukhtalif aur ustadana rang liye

hue hai. radeef tou mujhe bohat attract ker rahi hai :-) sabhi

ashaar bohat ache hain aur alfaaz ka chunao bhi umda.

daad qubool keejiye.

sara ...

Azeezan-e-bazm:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,

is bazm meN aaj apnii ek taazah Ghazal pesh karnaa chahtee hooN.
apnee aaraa aur rehnumayii se zaroor navaziye gaa bohat mamnoon hooNgii.

Wassalam

Zahida Raees :Raji:

Ghazal:
~~~~~~
nafeer-e-SubHa bajaao keh shab tamaam hoovii
Ghalaaf-e-marg haTaao keh ...

Raji sahiba Assalam alaikum
Bahut umdah zameen mai aik khoobsurat ustaazana tarz ki ghazal par dili mubarakbaad .


nafeer-e-SubHa bajaao keh shab tamaam hoovii
Ghalaaf-e-marg haTaao keh shab tamaam hoovii
wah wah bahut khoob


moHtaram janab-e-Mahtab Qadr SaaHeb:

Walaikum Assalam ...

Azeezan-e-bazm:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,

is bazm meN aaj apnii ek taazah Ghazal pesh karnaa chahtee hooN.
apnee aaraa aur rehnumayii se zaroor navaziye gaa bohat mamnoon hooNgii.

Wassalam

Zahida Raees :Raji:

Ver: 2

Ghazal:
~~~~

nafeer-e-SubHa bajaao keh shab tamaam hoovii
Ghalaaf-e-marg ...

moHtaram janab Webmaster jee:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,

bohat hee KhoobSooart Ghazal ka intiKhaab kiyaa hai aap ne.
tamaam hee ashaar bohat lajaawab heN .

mamnoon-o-taalib-e-dua'a
Zahida Raees :Raji:

moHtaram janab-e-Muzaffar SaaHeb:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,

is taraHee mushairah maiN miSrah-e-taraH dekh~ kar maiN qadre chonk gayii thee ke isee zameen aur behr meN meree ek puraanii Ghair taraHee Ghazal isee meHfil meN maujood hai.

jab kabhi DhoonDne nikle the Khushii ka chehraa
mujh se miltaa hee ...

moHtaram janab-e-Abdulllah Nazir SaaHeb:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,

aap kee yeh Ghazal bohat taKheer se dekh rahii hoN jiske liye bohat ma'azrat Khwah hooN.

aap kee is dilkash Ghazal kee jahaN zameen bohat mushkil aur khoobSoorat hai waheN aap ne is meN ashaar bhi bohat KhoobSoorat baandhe heN ...

moHtaram janab-e-Abdullah Nazir SaaHeb:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,

mujhe bohat Khushii hai keh is meHfil meN is baare meN sanjeedgii se ek tajveez pesh kee gayii hai.

ilm-e-urooz se nabalad mujh jaise log yeh zaroor chahte heN keh is ilm kee baabat juzyaat se hee seyr-HaaSil ma'aloomaat HaaSil kar ...

Janab-e-Farhaan SaaHeb:

Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,

in dushvaar zameen par itnee achii koshish pesh karne par meree jaanib se bhi daad qubool keejiye.

Khair andesh
Zahida Raees Raji