GHAZAL (1) Unki nazaroN meN andhera hi andhera hoga jisne sooraj ko bohat paas se dekha hoga Bhao Bazar Ke Girne ki Dua Mat Mango Bhao Girne Se Lahu Aur Bhi Sasta Hoga Usne Kal Raat Ujalon Ki Qasam Khayee Thi Aisa Lagta Hai Ke Sooraj Kahin Nikla Hoga DastakeN Di ThiN Yahi soch Ke DarwazoN Par Shahar...

mohatram yasir sha sb mulahezaat ke liye shukriya apne maosam aur baharon ke hawalen sa jo raye pesh ki hai mai samajhta hoon ke apne baharon ke liye moaanis lafz ka estemaal karne ki baat kahi hai jabke maosam bahareN leke aaya hai maosam mazakkar hai is liye mashware per nazre saani ker len matale...

Anmol Sahiba
Apki anmol daad ka bahot shukriya
Saba

Janab Muzaffar sb
Gazal ke her sher per apne apni raye irsal ki aor ashaar bhi pasand farmaye nawazish
Razwan Saba

Janab Muzaffar sb
Gazal ke her sher per apne apni raye irsal ki aor ashaar bhi pasand farmaye nawazish
Razwan Saba

Mohtram
siddiqe bhai
aadab
Is adna si kawish per apki haosla afzai ke liye shukriya

Mohtrama
aadab
Masha allah barhi pabandi se motaala karti hain ghazal ki pazirai ke liye behad shukria
Rizwan saba

janab apki khoobsoorat samaat ke liye behad mamnoon hoon.

Rizwan Saba

Mohatram
taslimat
Ashaar ki pasandeedgi aor hausla afzai ke liye behad mashkoor hoon gahe gahe site per apse mulaqat hoti rahegi
Rizwan Saba

Jise toone hamesha barsare paikaar likkha hai use duniya -e- huq ne qafila salaar likkha hai wafaoN pe kabhi saoda gari hamne nahiN seekhee hamara naam kiyon toone sare bazar likkha hai wahan ab kaunsa mausam bahareN leke ayega jahan sookhe darakhton ko bhi saya daar likkha hai yeh mumkin hai ujale ...

Woh jiske haath meN kashkol aor jhola tha yeh shakhs woh tha jo kal had se barhke bola tha HawayeN aaj tak karhwahatenN na dho payeeN Na jane kisne fazaoN men zaher ghola tha tum aaj ghoomne nikle ho aasmanoN per yeh rast a bhi khalaoN ka humne khola tha Rizwan Saba Badauni