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by rukhsar
Mon Nov 03, 2008 11:01 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: EK GHAZAL
Replies: 4
Views: 817

EK GHAZAL

GHAZAL

Mujh main jur,at hee nathee Inkaar ki
karkhaanay main teray Begaar ki

Eik to Emaan Dojay Zindigi
Dhaar dekhee do rukhee talwaar ki

baat muflis yaa ameeri ki nahi
baat hoti hay faqat kirdaar ki

kis nay rukh moRa balaa tofaan ka
aur Kishti kis nay apni paar ki

sach to yeh hay TOOR par ...
by rukhsar
Mon Nov 03, 2008 10:25 pm
Forum: Anjuman
Topic: Lafz par Ashaar#13--"TAMANNA / ARMAAN "
Replies: 44
Views: 29618

Re: Lafz par Ashaar#13--"TAMANNA / ARMAAN "

hay tamanna harf _ e gham lykar tamaam
ek ghazal main meer say bataiN karaiN

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by rukhsar
Wed May 14, 2008 12:32 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: Ghazal _ khataoN ki baateN
Replies: 9
Views: 1564

sohail malik sahib
aadab
mizaj-e giraami
aapki ghazal ka muta,ala kia mashah allah achchi ghazal hay sab achchy ash,aar hain
bhut khoob daad qubool kejey . wah wah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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is ghazal kay ek sher ka pahlaa misra kuch is tarah hay
...............
bhut marz ...
by rukhsar
Wed May 14, 2008 12:12 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: aik aur tarhi ghazl hazir hai
Replies: 2
Views: 472

mujahid sahib
aadab
mizaj-e giraami
aapki ghazal ka muta,alaa kia achcha kalam hay daad qubool kejey
rukhsar
by rukhsar
Wed May 14, 2008 12:07 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: jo mushkil rastaa hay
Replies: 5
Views: 930

Khurshidul Hasan Naiyer
SAHIB aadab
mizaj-e giraami
aapki daad aur housla afzaai ka be had mamnoon hon bhut shukriyaa nawazish
rukhsar
by rukhsar
Wed May 14, 2008 12:02 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: jo mushkil rastaa hay
Replies: 5
Views: 930

mohtaram Muzaffar sahib
aadab
mizaj-e giraami
aapki houslaa afzaai ka bhut shukriyaa aap hazraat ki housla afzaai say mazeed himmat
aa jati hay bhut shukriyaa
rukhsar
by rukhsar
Fri May 09, 2008 11:06 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: Tarahee Ghazal mushairah Urduduniya.com
Replies: 6
Views: 1148

jawaid badauni
sahib AADAB
aapki ek aur mea,ari ghazal ka muta.alaa kia
wah sahib waaaaaaaah bhut achchay ash,aar nikaalay hain

*
beTiyaN pehneNgee aglee nasl ki aisa libaas
baap bechara bus un ko dekhta reh jayega

bhut achcha sher hay waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
daad qubool farmaaey
rukhsar
by rukhsar
Fri May 09, 2008 10:55 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: jo mushkil rastaa hay
Replies: 5
Views: 930

jo mushkil rastaa hay

Aadab ek ghazal hazir-e khidmat hay aapki aaraa ka intizaar rahayga

GHAZAL

jo mushkil raasta hay
vohi hum nay chounaa hay

kinaray par khRay ho
vo koi doobtaa hay

meray ander hi ander
vo kitnaa boltaa hay

faqat kirdaar hain hum
yeh sub likhkha hoa hay

koi manzil nahi to
yeh par kiun toltaa ...
by rukhsar
Mon Apr 14, 2008 11:27 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: Nazm.......!!
Replies: 8
Views: 2212

mohtarama sara sahiba
aadab
bhut achchi aur sachchi NAZM hay daad qubool kejey
khaaskar aakhir kay 4 misray bhut pasand aay


duniya meN har aulaad se mera hai yeh kahna
maaN-baap ko peeri meN nah choRo kabhi tanha

kya Khaliq.e Akbar ka hai farman nah bhoolo
ik lamhe ko maan-baap ka eHsaan ...
by rukhsar
Fri Apr 11, 2008 9:08 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: jab woh mer bayaaz khole hai
Replies: 2
Views: 300

Re: jab woh mer bayaaz khole hai

aadab
achcha kalaam hay

shaAree koyee sehal kaam nahiN
dil dukhe to zabaaN bole hai
..........................

is sher main type ki ghalti hay durust kar lejeyga
rukhsar



urdu bandhan ke sukhanwaraan or ahbaab kee nazar ek ghazal

jab woh meree bayaaz khole hai
apne zulm o sitam pa roele hai ...
by rukhsar
Fri Apr 04, 2008 12:41 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: ~:: aik Ghazal URDUBANDHAN par pehlii baar ::~
Replies: 5
Views: 1070

mohtaram Syed Anwar Jawaid sahib
aadab
sab say pahlay to is bazm main aapko khush aamdeed kahtaa hon
KHUSH AAMDEED
aaj aapki ghazal ka muta,ala kia mashah allah bhut khoob sher hain
wah wah waaaaaaaaah daad qubool kejey
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Rukhsar
by rukhsar
Fri Apr 04, 2008 12:30 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: ek ghazal ( bhool baiThy thay )
Replies: 6
Views: 1157

mohtaram Jawaid Badauni Sahib
aadab
aapkay ta,awwun ka bhut bhut shukriyaa parwardigaar aapka
waqar aur buland karay
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Rukhsar
by rukhsar
Thu Apr 03, 2008 12:15 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: andheri shab , diyaa , jugnu , qamar , naiN
Replies: 5
Views: 1355

zia sahib
aadab
mijaz-e giraami
kaafi arsay baad bazm main haazri mumkin ho saki hay
aapki daad aur huoslaa ka bhut bhut shukriyaa bhut ziyaada takheer say shukriyaa adaa kar raha hon
moa,azrat chahta hon
..................
rukhsar
by rukhsar
Thu Apr 03, 2008 12:07 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: jis musawwir main khamoshi hogi
Replies: 3
Views: 787

mohtaram Jawaid Badauni sahib
aadab
jawed sahib aapnay sahi farmayaa is bazm maiN nayaa hon . aur pichlay 4/5 maah say bazm say ghair haazir raha
jiska malaal hay.. aapsay ghaibaana ta,arruf to hay bazm main aapka kalaam paRhta thaa behrhaal ab bazm maiN
haazir rahnay ki poori koshish rahaygi
aapki ...
by rukhsar
Wed Apr 02, 2008 11:51 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: ek ghazal ( bhool baiThy thay )
Replies: 6
Views: 1157

janab sameer sahib
aadab
houslaa afzaai ka bhut bhut shukriyaa , nawazish

mohammad rukhsar nazimabadi