Ismaa'il bh~aa,ii!

Salaam 'arZ hay!

bahut aCHh~ii ghazal kahi hay aapne. aapkay khaYaalaat mujh~ay bh~ii muta'cir kertay haiN. aise likh~tay rahYay aur hamaari daad wusool kertay rahYay. chand baateN kehta chaluNga, ap bh~ii kehtay hoNgay keh meN har baar kuchh~ khaami nikaalta huN. lekin yaqeen ...

Ismail Saahib!

aadaab!

aapki naZ^m bahut pasand aa,i aur aap jaise hi likh~nay waaloN ki ab ash-Had zarurat hay hameN. kuCHh~ kehna chaahuNga is umeed say keh aap is per meri rahnumaa,i fermaayeNgay.

"yeh tarz e amal pooree hee awaam kaa hai
humaaree shaKhSiyat tarbiyat yaa nizaam kaa hai
sabhee ...

محترم وقار صاحب
السلام علیکم

ہے سوز و گرمیء ہستی سے میری زیست کی مستی
مجھے منظور جل جانا، میں پروانہ ترا ساقی


کافی عرصہ بعد آپ کو بزم میں دیکھ کر مسّرت ہوئی۔ غزل اچّھی لگی ۔میری داد اور مبارکباد قبول فرمائیں۔
آپ کے مزید کلام کا انتظار رہے گا۔

مخلص
سالم باشوار

Waa'ELakum Janaab Saalam Saahib ...

ehl-e-bazm,

Salaam aur aadaab!

aik adna sii kaaviSh aapki nazr. aap sabki aara, ka mamnoon rahuuNgaa.

Shukriah!

waQaar :)

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woh maikaSh bh~ii tiraa saaqi,Yeh maikhaana tira saaqi
lab-e-tiShnah magar rakh~ta hay deewaana tira saaqi


hay soz-o ...

Haamid Bh~aa,ii!

ASsalaam, aadaab!

kaisay haiN aap?

aapki ghazlaiN aapki saadagi aur saChChaa,i ki 'akkaasi kerti haiN. merii daad qubool kee jiYay is kalaam per.

waQaar :)

aadaab farHaan SaaHeb,

aapki ghazal aCHh~ii hay aur bahut munfarid andaaz maiN hay. daad haaZir hay,qubool kee jiYya!

waQaar :)

Muzaffar SaaHeb,

aadaab,

huZoor kYa hii khoobSoorat ghazal nikaali hay aapnay. mujh~ay miSra'h pasand aaYa hay, soChta hooN kuCHh~ keH dooN.

aapki ghazal Yaqeeni t^or per mukhtalif aur uMdah hay. merii dilii daad qubool kee jiYay!

waQaar :)

Afzaal SaaHeb,

aapnay girah bh~ii khoob lagaa,ii aur She'r bh~ii aCHh~aa nikaalay. daad qubool kee jiYay!

waQaar :)

mujaahid SaaHeb,

saadah aur khoobSoorat kalaam per daad qubool kee jiYay!

waQaar :)

janaab Yaasir Shah SaaHeb,

aadaab!

huZoor kaisay haiN aap. aap to 'eed ka chaaNd hi ho gaye , patah nahiiN mujh~ay jaanaiNgay bh~ii Ya nahiiN.


aapka qit^'ah bahut pasand aaYa, aik uMdah soCh ko lafZ^oN maiN utaara hay aapnay. daad qubool kee jiYay!

waQaar :)

ehl-e-sukhan!

aadaab!

aik kaaviSh paiSh-e-khidmat hay. koii 2 maah qabl mat^la' huaa th~aa tabsay khatm kernay kii koShiSh maiN th~aa. ab jaisii bh~ii huii haaZir hay. apni aara, say nawaaziYay gaa. Shukriah!

waQaar

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ehl-e-khirad kii khud say Shanaasaa,i kYuuN nahiiN?
aql-o-Sh ...

Haamid bh~aaii,

Salaam!

aapki ghazal pasand aa,ii. merii dilii daad qubool kee jiYay!

waQaar :)

moHtaram Sohail Saaheb,

aadaab,

vaah Saaheb! aap barmalaa kehtay gaye aur kamaal ker gaye.

"salaam-e-shoq ko soCha hay ab haaye say badlaiNgay
khuda haafiZ^ puraana ho gaYa Baaye say badlaiNgay"
vaah! bahut khoob!

"adab ka kaam jinsi wehShatoN kii naghmah saazi hay
tawajjuh ka YahaaN markaz ...

aadaab!

aapkay naam say waaqif nahiiN is liYay ma'zirat. aap ka pasand kardah kalaam bahut pasand aaYa. bahut Shukriah!

waQaar :)

moHtaram Waqar SaHeb

m'aaziart chaahtaa hooN ke aap ki ghaza kuch dair se nazar aa-ii.

majmoo Tor par ye aik boha achhhii ghazal hai. laikin mujh jaise Taalib e ilm k leeaye bohat mushkil :). aor aap ke andaz se lagta hai ke kaafi mashq hai aap ki. kyaa aap ijaazat deN ge ke aik aik sher par ...