Khurshidul Hasan Naiyer wrote:Janaab Sameer Sb

Adaab

Achhe ashAaar haiN,

Daad Qabool farmaaiye

Allah Hafiz

Khurshidul Hasan Naiyer

HoSlaa afzaaii kay liye mamnoon hoN.


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moHtarmah Sara SaaHibah
aadaab.


aap kii naZm paRh kar baRi udaasi chaa gayee hai, bachpan maiN jin buzurgoN kii shafqat maiN aur jis maaHol (purana ghar) waghera maiN aankh kholii thi, woh sub shiddat say yaad aaraha hai .


mujh pe chahi hi yeh maayusi aap kii naZm kii kaamyabi kii zamaanat ...

Sameer SaHeb,

aap ki ghazal par dobraa nazar paRi to is sher par aTTak gayee

tez suuraj maiN par ko jalaati raheeN
shub ko murjhaa kay sub titliyaaN so gayeeN

par sooraj jalaataa hai ke dhoop?
titliyaaN murjhaati heN ke thakti heN?

regards,

moHtaram janaab Khawar SaaHib,
aadaab.

aap ney ...

apni har haar meN ik jeet ka rasta daikheN
ham agar haar ke har maat pe mucbat socheN

moHtaram Khawar SaaHib,
aadaab.

yuN toh poori Ghazal hi ach~chi lagi, lekin uper diya huwa shair toh bahat hi Khoob laga, is nayee aur mushkill zameen ko aap ney Khoob nibhaya hai.

naa cheez kii daad aur ...

Sohail Malik wrote:Bohat khuub Sameer saaheb

aap ki ghazal pasand ayee daad qabul kijiay

wassalam

sohail malik

moHtaram Sohail Malik SaaHib
aadaab.

HoSlaa afzaaii kay liye mamnoon hoN


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muhammad_19k wrote:

raat, tablay kii dhun per khanak~tii rahiiN
subh utrii huiiN chuuR~yaaN so gayeeN

great one!

mamnoon e karam


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Ayesha Anmol SaaHibah
aadaab.

HoSlaa afzaaii per intehaaii mamnoon hoN.

Ghalib kay lateefay wali baat ab tak adhorii hai.....


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moHtarmah Rukhsaar SaaHibah
aadaab.


abhi abhi aapki dusri Ghazal per daad di thi kay is ghazal per bhi nazar paRh gayee, aap toh waqiee kamaal shaaiiri kar rahiN haiN, choti choti behroN maiN, sel e mumtana ko apnatey huwe baRi fikr ko shair band karney kaa fun Khoob hai aap kay paas, aapkii laga ...

haadsay par ab koi ruktaa nahiN
apnay apnay waqt kay paaband log

bohat hi Khoob ruKhsaar saaHibah, daad HaaZir hai, gar qabool uftaad.


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HaaZreen e meHfil
aadaab.

apni naii Ghazal aap ki Khidmat maiN pesh kar raha hoN, is ummeed kay saath, kay aap apni qimati aaraa say, har giz mahroom nahiN kareNge. shukriyah.



din bhi Dhalnay lagaa bastiyaaN so gayeeN
chaand niklaa nahiN khiRkiyaaN so gayeeN

tez suuraj maiN par ko jalaati ...

Anmol SaaHibah.
aadaab.


MASHA ALLAH Khoob naZm kahi hai aap nay, aur hum sub apkay is Khvaab kii taAbeer kay liye dua go raheNgay.

bahat ach~chi naZm per naa cheez kii daad aur mubarakbaad HaaZir hai, aaindha bhi apnay kalaam say nawaaztay rahiye gaa.


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pyaaray dost Zia,
Assalaam o Alaikum


aapka maKhSooS lab o lehjah mujhay bayHad pasand hai, aur yehi lehjah aapki bharpoor kaamyaabi ki Zamaanat hai, mujhay aap ki paish kii hui kaamyaab Ghazal bohat bhaayee.

aik such~chi daad dill ki gehraaiyoN kay saath.

AAPKA BHAA~II, DOST


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moHtaramah Rehana SaaHibah
aadaab.


Ghazal lajawab hai, aur iski bharpoor daad bhi maiN aapko dusri maiN maiN de chuka, lekin Ghazal itni ach~chi hai kay yahaN bhi daad diye bina koi charaa nahiN.

ALLAH karey zor e Qalam aur ziyadah.



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miim_miim_mughal wrote:

PYAAREY BHAAII MUGHAL


MASHAALLAH moHtaram Khaalid Aliig SaaHib kii naZr kiya huwa aapka kalaam jazbaat say labraiz hai,


ALLAH KAREY ZOR E QALAM AUR ZIYADAH.

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pyaaray bhaaii Mughal


aapkii aamad bila shubaa mere aur ehbaab kay liye baaiC e musarrat hai ...