Muntakhab shayari-Baitbaazi-Lafz par Ashaar
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najma
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by najma »
Mahtab Qadr wrote:ham se jaaya na gaya
un se bhagaaya na gaya
un/gay
in do me se kisi lafz se shuru karna tha,aap ne =hay=seshurukiya hay.
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Mahtab Qadr
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by Mahtab Qadr »
sher to tafreeh e taba ke taur par likh dia tha magar aap chahti haiN to isi tarah chaliye aap ki baat par amal karte haiN :)
un se bhagaya na gaya
ham se jaaya na gaya.
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Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir »
ham ko manzil tou kujaa koiee nishaaN tak nah milaa,
qaafilah aaj bhii hei garm-e-safar kyaa keeje.
qaafilah / keeje
Nazir.
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najma
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by najma »
qaflay manzil pe aaa k luT gaey
manzilon k faaslon se poochiye
manzil/ poochiye
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Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir »
manzil-e-shauq kii jaanib thay ravaaN ham lekin
raahbar jis ko samajhte thay wo rehzan niklaa.
raahbar / niklaa
Nazir.
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najma
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by najma »
rah-bar samajh liya hay tuje, gard-e-karawaaN!
chalte raheN gay ham bhi, jahaaN tak Ghubaar hay
najma
chalte/hay
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Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir »
chalte rahenge jaanib-e-mazil hameshah saath
dushwaar raastah hei tou rehne bhii deejiye.
( /dushwaar / deejiye )
Nazir.
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najma
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by najma »
baRe wucuuq se dunya fareb detii rahii
baRe khuloos se ham e,tibar karte rahay
shaukat wastii
baRe/ rahay
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Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir »
baRe Haseen thay alfaaz us sitamgar ke
wafaa kaa naam liyaa aur be-wafaayii kii.
{wafaa / kii)
Nazir.
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najma
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by najma »
wafa ka nam zamane meiN hogaya nayab
ye ach,cha kaam zamane meiN hogaya nayab
najma
ye/ nayab
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Abdullah Nazir
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by Abdullah Nazir »
yeh zindagi bhi Ajab imtihaaN hei dunyaa meiN
qareeb jiske maiN houtaa hooN, door houtaa hei.
"ye"
Nazir.
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najma
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by najma »
yaqeen karne ko karloon maiN unki batoN par
magar wo roz naee baat suna detay haiN
najma
magar/ haiN
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najma
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by najma »
mere dil ki dhaRkanoN se tira Gham hay aashkaaraa
keh yehii Gham-e-mohabbat mire dil ka hay sahaaraa
najma
keh/sahaaraa
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najma
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by najma »
sara_j wrote:kaha betaab hoker meri rooh-e-jawaidaani se
keh haasil roshni ker is fazaaye aasmaani se
hmmmmmmmm :P
aap ne sher ko -------
ab bataiyye ham =say=se she,r kahaan se laeiN?
Daal diyana uljhan meiN--------------
acha sochen gay
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najma
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by najma »
sara_j wrote:najjo ji aapke liye aek shair bilkul taza ustadji ke qalam se
keh bhool jaaouN na maiN apni baat us ne kahaa
khayaal rakhyiye ke milnaa zaroor hei kal bhii
khayaal / bhii
hmmmm
ye huee na baaaaat ustadanah
khayal-e-yaar ne choRaa na saath jeetay-jee
gayaa, to saath mirii ruuh ka dhuwaaN lekar
nafis ahmad siddiqui
gaya/le-kar
