PASANDEEDA ASH,AAR

Post by **Waqar Zaidi** » Sun Jun 19, 2005 1:35 pm

kehtaa nahin hay koii bhi sach baat in dinon

achhay nahin hain shehr kay haalaat in dinon

Shaair : Arif Shafeeq.

Post by **najma** » Sun Jun 19, 2005 3:06 pm

kaif-e-manzil asl meiN dushwaari-e-manzil se hay
kuch dinoN rah-e-talab meiN ThokareN khanay bhi day
nafis ahmad siddiqui

Post by **najma** » Sun Jun 19, 2005 5:21 pm

zad meiN toofaan ki safeenay haiN
dooor se dekhta kinara hay
nafis ahmad siddiqui

Post by **Waqar Zaidi** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 5:18 am

mat sehl hamain jaano phirtaa hay falak barson

tab khaak kay parday say insaan nikaltay hain

Shaair : Mir Taqi Mir.

Post by **najma** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 8:34 am

hazaroN manzileN hoNgeeN, hazaroN karawaaN hoNgay
bahaareN hamko DhoonDeNgeeN, najanay ham kahaaN hoNgay

Post by **Waqar Zaidi** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 5:42 pm

ye naama nahin maira arthi hay mohabbat ki

ek baar isay parhnaa phir aag lagaa daina

Waqar Zaidi.

Post by **najma** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 6:30 pm

Waqar Zaidi wrote:ye naama nahin maira arthi hay mohabbat ki

ek baar isay parhnaa phir aag lagaa daina

Waqar Zaidi.

WAAH
kyaa sher hay

bohat khoob

hazaroN saal nargis apni be-noorii pe rotee hay
baRee mushkil se hota hay chaman meiN dedah-war paida

Post by **Waqar Zaidi** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 8:15 pm

dear najma baaji!

sher pasand karnay kaa bohat shukriya. jab main university main parh rahaa thaa to un dinon ye sher likhaa thaa aur is par ghazal likhnay ki bohat koshish ki magar na likh payaa. ye mairi khush qismati hay ke us waqt urdu deptt ki har larhki ki dairy main ye sher maujood thaa. aik aur zaati sher sun lijiye:

yeh tairi bay rukhi nay diya hay mujhay payaam

misl e charaagh taa bah sahar har shab jalaa karoon

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Post by **najma** » Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:12 pm

Waqar Zaidi wrote:dear najma baaji!

sher pasand karnay kaa bohat shukriya. jab main university main parh rahaa thaa to un dinon ye sher likhaa thaa aur is par ghazal likhnay ki bohat koshish ki magar na likh payaa. ye mairi khush qismati hay ke us waqt urdu deptt ki har larhki ki dairy main ye sher maujood thaa. aik aur zaati sher sun lijiye:

yeh tairi bay rukhi nay diya hay mujhay payaam

misl e charaagh taa bah sahar har shab jalaa karoon

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aap ye link dekhiye.karamad rahega.ghazal kehne ka asaan tareeqa darj hay.

http://forum.urdubandhan.com/phpBB2/vie ... php?t=1385

dekha hay maiN ne dil ki be-taabiyoN ka manzar
ik TooT,tee kalii meiN, ik Doobtee kiran meiN
saGhar

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:37 am

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"aankheN baRi baRi heiN magar dil baRaa nahiN

Is bewafaa ko kaam kisi se paRaa nahiN."

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Nazir.

Post by **Waqar Zaidi** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 4:36 am

kab say un paakbaaz aankhon mein

parh rahaa hoon namaaz aankhon mein

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mujh say Mahmood kaa maqaam na poochh

phir rahaa hay Ayaaz aankhon mein

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ashk palkon pe raqs karnay lagay

kis nay chhairhaa hay saaz aankhon mein

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Saba · Post by **Saba** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 4:54 am

kab talak kaanton say daaman ko bachaauon apnay

koii patthar nahin insaan hoon aakhir main bhi

Post by **najma** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 7:36 pm

phooloN ko ag lag gaee naGhmaat jal gaey
sooraj ki tez dhoop meiN lamhaat jal gaey
saGhar

best · Post by **best** » Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:45 am

Aadaab,

Wo aur hoon ge jo teri bazm se uth gaiye

Hum to wo dagh hain jo lag gaiye so lag gaite

i m the best

Post by **najma** » Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:51 am

muflisoN pe hans rahii haiN azmateN insaan ki
or khuda ki rehmateN mansoob zar-daroN ke saath
saGhar

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