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"maiN"

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maiN nah kahtaa thaa tumheiN Ahd nibhaanaa hougaa

aaj kiyuN karte hou dunyaa se shikaayat meri.


(aaj / meri)


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gayaa! par kuchh na kah paayaa maiN apnaa Haal-e-dil unse
kaf-e-afsos maltaa rai'h gayaa maiN chaarsoo barsoN

KhizaaN pamaal kar detee hai gulshan ke har ek gul ko
NaheeN jaataa magar qalb.o.jigar se rang.o.boo barasoN

Rafoogar dete aaye haiN tasallee umr bhar lekin
Jo dil par zakhm aa jaye naheeN hotaa rafoo barsoN


PK Swami
mujhe dil diyaa to taRap bhee de
jo hooN doosroN kaa sharik.e gham
mujhe aisey dil kee talab naheeN
jo kisii ke kaam na aa sake
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VO bazm meN aaye, itnaa to "MEER" me dekhaa
phir uske ba'd charaaGhoN meN raushnii na rahii


Meer taqi "MEER"
PHIR / RAHII
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phir na kije merii gustaakh nigahee kaa gilaa
dekhiye aap ne phir pyaar se dekhaa mujhko

PK Swami
mujhe dil diyaa to taRap bhee de
jo hooN doosroN kaa sharik.e gham
mujhe aisey dil kee talab naheeN
jo kisii ke kaam na aa sake
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phir na keeje merii gustaakh nigahee kaa gilaa
dekhiye aap ne phir pyaar se dekhaa mujhko

PK Swami
mujhe dil diyaa to taRap bhee de
jo hooN doosroN kaa sharik.e gham
mujhe aisey dil kee talab naheeN
jo kisii ke kaam na aa sake
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dekhiye ghaur se maiN aapka aayeenah hooN

sirf soorat hii nahiN dil bhii nazar aayegaa.


sirf / aayegaa


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sirf ashk-o-tabassum mei.n ulajhe rahe
hamane dekhaa nahin zindagii ki taraf
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ham dai'hr ke is viiraane meN jo kuchh bhii nazaara karte haiN
ashkoN kii zabaaN meN kahte haiN, aahoN se ishaara karte haiN


Mo'iin AHsan "Jazbii"
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yeh ishaare, yeh kinaaye, yeh tabassum, yeh adaa

sab ke sab heiN mujhe deewaanah banaane ke liye.


sab / liye


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voHee ghamzaa, voHee shokhee, voHee diwanaakun nazreN
tasawwar meiN bhee vo samaane vaHshat le ke aaye haiN


PK Swami
mujhe dil diyaa to taRap bhee de
jo hooN doosroN kaa sharik.e gham
mujhe aisey dil kee talab naheeN
jo kisii ke kaam na aa sake
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hain aur bhi sukhanwar zamanay mein achay
kehtay hain ghalib ka hai andaz-e-bayan aur

any correction


kehtay/aur
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mein apni urdu ki teacher ka aik sher sunatee hon
mujhe bohat pasand hai
umeed hai aap ko bhi ayega




CHAHA hai tujhe bhi tu sar-e-aam hamesha
jo kaam bhi kerte hain chupaya nahi kertay
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wow Raush...tumhaarii teacher to balaa kii shaai'ra haiN...zaraa ham se bhii milvaaiyegaa :wink:

jo bhii buraa bhalaa hai, Allaah jaantaa hai
bande ke dil meN kia hai, Allaah jaantaa hai


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aur kuchh poochho mizaaj.e dil.e nashaad abhee
mere naghmoN meiN hai kuchh talkhiy.e fariyaad abhee


PK Swami
mujhe dil diyaa to taRap bhee de
jo hooN doosroN kaa sharik.e gham
mujhe aisey dil kee talab naheeN
jo kisii ke kaam na aa sake
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wo muHabbat meiN kuch itnaa mujh se ghaafil hougayaa

aek veeraanah saa meraa khaana-e-dil hougayaa.


( aek / hougayaa)


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