Sunsaan sa lagney laga

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Sunsaan sa lagney laga

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Hazreen-e-mehfil
Tasleemat..
Aapki khidmat mein
Taza Ghazal hazir he, qabool kijiye

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Almas saHib

aadaab arz hai

aap ki ye ghazal achi lagee

hamaari jaanib se daad qubool kijiye

amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Almas saHib

aadaab arz hai

aap ki ye ghazal achi lagee

hamaari jaanib se daad qubool kijiye

amjad
Mohtram Amjad Sahib
Kaisay hain,
Aap ki daad aour Hosla afzai ka bohat shukriya.
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almas ji buhat buhat hi khoob soorat ghazal hay. mujay waqai afsoos hoo raha hay ka main nay aap koo pehlay kun nay paRha. aik aik sher hasil a ghazal hay. panchwan aur chata sher too khas toor par pasand aay.
aik bat na koo du rukni istamal karnay say guraiz kia karain
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almas ji buhat buhat hi khoob soorat ghazal hay. mujay waqai afsoos hoo raha hay ka main nay aap koo pehlay kun nay paRha. aik aik sher hasil a ghazal hay. panchwan aur chata sher too khas toor par pasand aay.
aik bat na koo du rukni istamal karnay say guraiz kia karain
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Bhai, Na koi naam na ta'ruf, uoon lag raha he... :? :? :?

"Ham chall rahey hain shayed kisi ajnabi ke saath"

Aap ne itney piyar se ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka izhaar kiya he, to hamari taraf se bharpoor shukriya qabool kijiye. Aainda bhi mulaqat rahe gi, Aapki tajweez sar ankhon per. :-) :-) :-)

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Almas ji,

adaab arz hai.

aapko aapke kalaam ke saath yehan bohat din baad jab bhi dekhti hoon tou
aek khushi ki lehar ajaati hai ke aapne humein bhulaya nahi.


tum gaye tou shehar bhi sunsaan saa lagne laga
milne wala har koi anjaan saa lagne laga

so very true......bohat acha shair haqeeqat dikha raha hai!

naachne lagta tha akser tujh se mil ker jo kabhi
dil wahi seene mein ab bejaan sa lagne laga

beh na jaaun phir kahin ashkon ke is sailaab mein
aaj palkon mein chupa toofan sa lagne laga

very nice!

dekh ker tanha mujhe Almas phir muddat ke baad
har koii mehfil mein kuch hairaan sa lagne laga

bohat ache! umeed ke ainda bhi aap apna kalaam humse share karte rahenge.

sara
Sara Ji
Salam-o-Aadab
Ma'zrat chahtey hooay hazar hhoa hoon, chand aik majbooriuon ne waqt nahein diya. Magar aap ke aqeedat bharay khiyalat perhney ka moaqa zaroor mila. Bas yeh yaqeen rakhiye ke bhoola nahein hoon. Ghazal ke ashaar ki pasandeedgi ke liye shukriya qabool kerein. aik aour ghazal per aapki nigah-e-karam ka mutwaqeh hoon, zaroor dekhiye ga.

Khair Andesh
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