tum se shayad koiee sawaal na hou...Guzarish # 1

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Post by rahmed25682 »

Aadaab Sara ..

Wah bohat he khoob ...

Mashallah .. aap kee ghazal bhoat achhy hay .. mukhtasir behr main bhee aap nay achhy ghazal kahy hay..

Khush rahain

Khair Andesh

Raheel Ahmed
Kab Say HooN , Kia BataaooN Jahan-e-Kharab Main
Shab-Haaye Hijr Ko Bhee RakhooN Gar Hisab Main
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Post by tahira Masood »

Dear sara sis

salaam-e-khloss

ether aap ne meHfil ki meHfil loot lee aur hameiN khabre nah huee? wah re -khebri haamari!!!

nehanaa bohat a'Alaa khiyaalat ko saleeqae se aap ne ghazal ki leRe meN pitoyaa hai.
khaas taur peh yeh ashAar pasaNd aaaey.


2. Diida-e-shauq hai to sab kuch hai
varnah, ra'naaii-e-jamaal na ho

3. baat dil kii jo tum karo mujhse
zindagii kaa safar moHaal na ho

5. saath teraa hai is qadar pyaaraa
hai tamanna ise zawaal na ho

6. yuN guzar jaayeN roz_o_shab apne
zindagaanii kabhii vabaal na ho


khush rehain aur esi teraHapne khosbsurat kalaam se nawaazti rehaiN.
wassalam
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