ishq ke raastay dushvaar tamaam

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ishq ke raastay dushvaar tamaam

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aadaab ehl-e-bazm

aik kaavish haazir-e-khidmat hai ummeed hai k apni qeemati aara se navaazain ge

ishq ke raastay dushvaar tamaam
haan! magar khultay hai asraar tamaam

ibn-e-maryam ho k chaahe mansoor
rah rav-e-ishq charhay daar tamaam

qaish farhaad k raanjha jogi
mazhab-e-ishq ke avtaar tamaam

ham ne daikhaa hai zamaane kaa chalan
jab paraa waqt ga'ae yaar tamaam

us ki i shookh nazar aur riaz
ham lutaa baitay hain ghar baar tamaam

riaz
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riaz ahmed saraa wrote:aadaab ehl-e-bazm

aik kaavish haazir-e-khidmat hai ummeed hai k apni qeemati aara se navaazain ge

ishq ke raastay dushvaar tamaam
haan! magar khultay hai asraar tamaam

ibn-e-maryam ho k chaahe mansoor
rah rav-e-ishq charhay daar tamaam

qaish farhaad k raanjha jogi
mazhab-e-ishq ke avtaar tamaam

ham ne daikhaa hai zamaane kaa chalan
jab paraa waqt ga'ae yaar tamaam

us ki i shookh nazar aur riaz
ham lutaa baitay hain ghar baar tamaam

riaz
ChoTee see zameen meN choTee see gahzal magar bahut achchee. Daad.o.tahseen qubool kijiye.

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jawaid badauni wrote:
riaz ahmed saraa wrote:aadaab ehl-e-bazm

aik kaavish haazir-e-khidmat hai ummeed hai k apni qeemati aara se navaazain ge

ishq ke raastay dushvaar tamaam
haan! magar khultay hai asraar tamaam

ibn-e-maryam ho k chaahe mansoor
rah rav-e-ishq charhay daar tamaam

qaish farhaad k raanjha jogi
mazhab-e-ishq ke avtaar tamaam

ham ne daikhaa hai zamaane kaa chalan
jab paraa waqt ga'ae yaar tamaam

us ki i shookh nazar aur riaz
ham lutaa baitay hain ghar baar tamaam

riaz
ChoTee see zameen meN choTee see gahzal magar bahut achchee. Daad.o.tahseen qubool kijiye.

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Jawaid Badauni
Jawaid Badauni sahib

aadaab

beHad mamnoon hun ka aap ne gahzal ko parah aur ise saraaha

ummeed hai k yuhi hosala afzaaii farmaate rahain ge

naiz mand

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riaz ahmed saraa wrote:aadaab ehl-e-bazm

aik kaavish haazir-e-khidmat hai ummeed hai k apni qeemati aara se navaazain ge

ishq ke raastay dushvaar tamaam
haan! magar khultay hai asraar tamaam

ibn-e-maryam ho k chaahe mansoor
rah rav-e-ishq charhay daar tamaam

qaish farhaad k raanjha jogi
mazhab-e-ishq ke avtaar tamaam

ham ne daikhaa hai zamaane kaa chalan
jab paraa waqt ga'ae yaar tamaam

us ki i shookh nazar aur riaz
ham lutaa baitay hain ghar baar tamaam

riaz
Riaz bhai

salaam arz hai

is saNglaakh zameen meiN aap ne ache mazaameen nikaale haiN

bas ash'aar ki taa'daa thoRi zyaada hoti to aur behtar hota.

magar jitne haiN voh bhi ache haiN :), meri jaanib se daad qubool farmaaiN

amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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sara_j wrote:
riaz ahmed saraa wrote:aadaab ehl-e-bazm

aik kaavish haazir-e-khidmat hai ummeed hai k apni qeemati aara se navaazain ge

ishq ke raastay dushvaar tamaam
haan! magar khultay hai asraar tamaam

ibn-e-maryam ho k chaahe mansoor
rah rav-e-ishq charhay daar tamaam

qaish farhaad k raanjha jogi
mazhab-e-ishq ke avtaar tamaam

ham ne daikhaa hai zamaane kaa chalan
jab paraa waqt ga'ae yaar tamaam

us ki i shookh nazar aur riaz
ham lutaa baitay hain ghar baar tamaam

riaz
riaz saahib,

salaam.

bohat din baad aapka kalaam dekh ker
bohat khushi hui.

hamesha ki tarah ghazal ke sabhi ashaar bohat dilkash hain.
daad qubool keejiye.

sara
Sara Jabeen sahiba

aadaab arz hai

bas masroofiat ki wajah se dair ho jaati hai jis kaa afsoos hai

aap ne ghazal ko pasand faramaaya behad mamnoon hun

umeed hai k isi tarah hosala afzaaii farmaati rahin gi

niaz mand

riaz :-)
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Ibn-e-siddique wrote:
riaz ahmed saraa wrote:aadaab ehl-e-bazm

aik kaavish haazir-e-khidmat hai ummeed hai k apni qeemati aara se navaazain ge

ishq ke raastay dushvaar tamaam
haan! magar khultay hai asraar tamaam

ibn-e-maryam ho k chaahe mansoor
rah rav-e-ishq charhay daar tamaam

qaish farhaad k raanjha jogi
mazhab-e-ishq ke avtaar tamaam

ham ne daikhaa hai zamaane kaa chalan
jab paraa waqt ga'ae yaar tamaam

us ki i shookh nazar aur riaz
ham lutaa baitay hain ghar baar tamaam

riaz
Riaz bhai

salaam arz hai

is saNglaakh zameen meiN aap ne ache mazaameen nikaale haiN

bas ash'aar ki taa'daa thoRi zyaada hoti to aur behtar hota.

magar jitne haiN voh bhi ache haiN :), meri jaanib se daad qubool farmaaiN

amjad

Amjad bhaaii

aadaab arz hai

ghazal ko pasand farmaane par mamnoon hun

ye ghazal kaafi puraani hai aur us waqt bas yahi ashaar hu'ae abb joon kaa toon unhain post kar dyaa

hosalaa afzaaaaii kaa shukria ummeed hai k aainda bhi yuhi karam farmaaii farmaatay rahin ge

riaaz :-)
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riaz ahmed saraa wrote:ishq ke raastay dushvaar tamaam
haan! magar khultay hai asraar tamaam

ibn-e-maryam ho k chaahe mansoor
rah rav-e-ishq charhay daar tamaam
adaab Riaz Sahib!

Bohot Khoob ghazal share ki aap ne, daad qubool kijiye.

:-)
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Anmol wrote:
riaz ahmed saraa wrote:ishq ke raastay dushvaar tamaam
haan! magar khultay hai asraar tamaam

ibn-e-maryam ho k chaahe mansoor
rah rav-e-ishq charhay daar tamaam
adaab Riaz Sahib!

Bohot Khoob ghazal share ki aap ne, daad qubool kijiye.

:-)
Anmol sahiba

aadaab

behad mamnoon hoon k aap ne ghazal ko parah aur isay saraaha

aap ki daad dil ki garioon se qubool ki

niaz mand

riaz :-)
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