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sab kuch mai bhula baitha tha hangaamey jonoo mai
ab hosh mai aaya hoon to ghar dhoond raha hoon
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qafas meiN thay, to har-ik shaakh intizaar meiN thii
qafas se nikle,to ab aashiyaaN naheeN milta
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samajh rahe thay ke dunyaa hei apne qaaboo meiN

magar wo but hei ke uskaa nishaaN nahiN miltaa.



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Post by najma »

dair-o-haram ki raah se dil bach gaya magar
terii galii ke moR pe saudaaee ban gaya
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ye soch lo ab aaKhri saya hai muhabbat
is dar se uthoge to koyi dar na milegaa
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gar ijazat ho to qismat aazmaa kar dekh leiN?
aap hi ke sang-e-dar pe sir jhuka kar dekh leiN?
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dil khulaa, aankheN khuli heiN, dar khulaa

chouR jaa khaT unkaa naamah bar khulaa.



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nazar aatii naheeN soorat koee tark-e-ta,alluq kii
keh ab to saathlay aataa hay nama-bar qalam kaGhaz
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chalo achcha houaa, ab guftagu kii raah nikli hei

zaraa maiN bhii tou dekhooN kal kahaaN tak baat phonche gi.



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Post by najma »

baat niklii to baat chal niklii
baR h gaee baat, baatoN baatoNmeiN

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shaairii jiska naam hay najma!
waqt ki daastaan hotii hay
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kitabon kii dokaan kholi hai mainey
bahot sastey mai zever baichta hoon
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shahnaz zafar wrote:kitabon kii dokaan kholi hai mainey
bahot sastey mai zever baichta hoon

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khuda rak,khay salamat unko, jin ke faiz ne najma!
mohabbat ki khalish de-kar kitab-e- shaairii dedii
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hamaare darmiyaaN kuch faasle Taiy hou nahiN paaye

rah-e-ulfat meiN yooN hii gaamzan rehnaa zaroori hei.



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maslehat thii jo hogaee khaamosh
warna alfaaz ki kamii hay kahaaN
rabiya siddiqui sham,a
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