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Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique »
nahin ke mujh ko qayaamat ka ai'tiqaad nahiN
shab-e-firaaq se roz-e-jazaa zyaad nahiN
shab / nahiN
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani »
nahiiN
nahiiN ma'loom kis kis ka lahoo paanii huaa hogaa
qayaamat hai sarishk aalooda honaa terii mizgaN kaa?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"qayaamat" ya lafz-e-"kaa" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique »
qayaamat yaqeenan qareeb aa rahi hai
khumar ab to masjid meiN jaane lage haiN
khumar / haiN
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani »
nahiiN
nahiiN, ki mujhko qayaamat kaa ai'teqaad nahiiN
shab-e-firaaq se roz-e-jazaa ziyaad nahiiN?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"shab" ya lafz-e-"nahiiN" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique »
nahin tera nasheman qasr-e-sultaani ke gunbad per
tu shaaheeN hai basera ker pahaaRoN ki chaTTaanoN meiN
tu / meiN
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani »
tu
tu aur soo-e-Ghai'r nazar_haa-e-tez_tez!
maiN aur dukh tirii mizah_haa-e-daraaz kaa?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"maiN" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique »
tum maah-e-shab-e-chaar dahum the mere ghar ke
kyuN phir na rahaa ghar ka wo naqsha koii din aur
kyuN / aur
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Shummu
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by Shummu »
Mujhko haathoN ki lakeeroN meiN na uljhaao yaaro!
MaiN hoon tadbeer se taqdeer badalne waala
(iqbal)
MaiN/Waala
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Mahtab Qadr
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by Mahtab Qadr »
sara_j wrote:main aarzuu-e-jaaN likhuuN yaa jaan-e-aarzuu
tuu hii bataade naaz se iimaan-e-aarzuu
tuu hi / aarzu
tuu hi bataade naazneeN ye kaun naaz hai
tujh par khula ye kaise mire dil ka raaz hai (mazahiya filbadeeh)
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Shummu
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by Shummu »
tujh se kis tarah mai.n izhaar-e-tamannaa karataa
lafz suujhaa to maanii ne baGaavat kar dii
lafz/dii
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Mahtab Qadr
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by Mahtab Qadr »
Shummu wrote:tujh se kis tarah mai.n izhaar-e-tamannaa karataa
lafz suujhaa to maanii ne baGaavat kar dii
lafz/dii
di mujhe us ne mohabbat ke ewaz mai nafrat
mai khareedar raha,phir bhi khasaare mai raha
khasaara
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Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique »
rahaa ghar koii taa qayaamat salaamat
phir ik roz marna hai hazrat salaamat
phir / salaamat
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Hashmat Usmani
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by Hashmat Usmani »
phir
phir vohii shaam. vohii Gham, vohii tanhaaii hai
dil ko taRpaane terii yaad chalii aaii hai?
Ghaalib
lafze-e-"dil" ya lafz-e-"hai" se agla she'r marHamat farmaaiye, shukria.
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Ibn-e-siddique
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by Ibn-e-siddique »
hai mujh per taa'na zan khud mera aHsaas
tamanna apni qeemat ko rahi hai
tamanna / hai
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Shummu
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by Shummu »
tamannaa dard-e-dil kii ho to kar Khidamat faqiiro.n kii
nahii.n miltaa ye gauhar baadashaaho.n ke Khaziino.n me.n
nahin/meiN
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
