"naazuki khatm hei....": Irfan Barabankwi
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"naazuki khatm hei....": Irfan Barabankwi
MuHtaramaat o MuHtarameen
Ahbaab-e-shukhan
Aadaab
Hairar Ali aatish ke mandarja-e-zel misreA per apni ghazal pesh karrahaa hooN:
"naazuki khatm hei un phool se rukhsaaraoN per"
GHAZAL roman meiN
ghar chuTaa kyaa, houi uftaad ye be-chaaraoN per
tuhmat-e-dasht-navardi lagi naadaaraoN per
Zarb dushman ne lagaayi miri deevaaraoN per
yaAni Hamlah kiyaa us ne mire aacaaraoN per
Haye kyaa khoob yeh andaaz-e-maseeHaayi hei
Ik nazar Daal gaye aake wo beemaaraoN per
Haal furqat kaa nah ab aap khudaaraa poocheN
yuN samajh leejiye leTaa hooN maiN angaaraoN per
be-hunar saare navaaze gaye eA'zaazaoN se
aur navaazish nahiN koii houi fankaaraoN per
baa-Hamiyyat sabhi sar apnaa kaTaadete heiN
aanch aane nahiN dete kabhi dastaaraoN per
nakhudaa'aoN ne Dubooye the safeene apne
aur ilzaam lagaaye gaye manjdhaaraoN per
micl unke koii tamceel kahaaN se laauN
"naazuki khatm hei un phool se rukhsaaraoN per"
be-Hijaabaanah nikal aaye wo :IrfaaN: baahar
barq girjaaye nah dekho kahiN gulzaaraoN per
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Khair Andesh,
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iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
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Sarwar A. Raz
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janaab Irfan Barabankawi SaaHeb: aadaab!
muddat ke ba'd aap ko dekh` rahaa hooN. kahaaN rahe ab tak? Ghazal paRhee aur pasand aayee. chand baateN likh` rahaa hooN jo Sirf mere Zaatee Khayaal haiN. aur bas!
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ghar chuTaa kyaa, houi uftaad ye be-chaaraoN per
(gh`ar kaa ch`uTnaa huwaa uftaad yeh be-chaaroN par)
tuhmat-e-dasht-navardi lagi naadaaraoN per
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Zarb dushman ne lagaayi miri deevaaraoN per
yaAni Hamlah kiyaa us ne mire aacaaraoN per
pehlaa miSra' to Theek hai lekin :aacaaroN: kaa qaafiyah kuch` kh`ap naheeN rahaa hai. waise yeh Sirf meraa Khayaal hai.
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Haye kyaa khoob yeh andaaz-e-maseeHaayi hei
Ik nazar Daal gaye aake wo beemaaraoN per
waah! daad qubool keejiYe.
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Haal furqat kaa nah ab aap khudaaraa poocheN
yuN samajh leejiye leTaa hooN maiN angaaraoN per
maZ^moon bohat puraanaa hai aur bayaan bh`ee aisaa hee puraanaa! ek naz^ar aur dekh` leN to harj naheeN hai.
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be-hunar saare navaaze gaye eA'zaazaoN se
aur navaazish nahiN koii houi fankaaraoN per
iz^haar-e-Haqeeqat hai!
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baa-Hamiyyat sabhi sar apnaa kaTaadete heiN
aanch aane nahiN dete kabhi dastaaraoN per
nakhudaa'aoN ne Dubooye the safeene apne
aur ilzaam lagaaye gaye manjdhaaraoN per
yeh she'r achh`e haiN. pasand aaYe!
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micl unke koii tamceel kahaaN se laauN
"naazuki khatm hei un phool se rukhsaaraoN per"
:un ke micl koyee tamceel: ya'nee kyaa? :micl, tamceel: to ek hee cheez haiN!
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be-Hijaabaanah nikal aaye wo :IrfaaN: baahar
barq girjaaye nah dekho kahiN gulzaaraoN per
yeh maZ^moon bh`ee ab bohat kahaa jaa chukaa hai. majmoo,e'e t^aur se Ghazal pasand aayee. daad HaaZ^ir hai.
Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"
muddat ke ba'd aap ko dekh` rahaa hooN. kahaaN rahe ab tak? Ghazal paRhee aur pasand aayee. chand baateN likh` rahaa hooN jo Sirf mere Zaatee Khayaal haiN. aur bas!
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ghar chuTaa kyaa, houi uftaad ye be-chaaraoN per
(gh`ar kaa ch`uTnaa huwaa uftaad yeh be-chaaroN par)
tuhmat-e-dasht-navardi lagi naadaaraoN per
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Zarb dushman ne lagaayi miri deevaaraoN per
yaAni Hamlah kiyaa us ne mire aacaaraoN per
pehlaa miSra' to Theek hai lekin :aacaaroN: kaa qaafiyah kuch` kh`ap naheeN rahaa hai. waise yeh Sirf meraa Khayaal hai.
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Haye kyaa khoob yeh andaaz-e-maseeHaayi hei
Ik nazar Daal gaye aake wo beemaaraoN per
waah! daad qubool keejiYe.
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Haal furqat kaa nah ab aap khudaaraa poocheN
yuN samajh leejiye leTaa hooN maiN angaaraoN per
maZ^moon bohat puraanaa hai aur bayaan bh`ee aisaa hee puraanaa! ek naz^ar aur dekh` leN to harj naheeN hai.
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be-hunar saare navaaze gaye eA'zaazaoN se
aur navaazish nahiN koii houi fankaaraoN per
iz^haar-e-Haqeeqat hai!
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baa-Hamiyyat sabhi sar apnaa kaTaadete heiN
aanch aane nahiN dete kabhi dastaaraoN per
nakhudaa'aoN ne Dubooye the safeene apne
aur ilzaam lagaaye gaye manjdhaaraoN per
yeh she'r achh`e haiN. pasand aaYe!
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micl unke koii tamceel kahaaN se laauN
"naazuki khatm hei un phool se rukhsaaraoN per"
:un ke micl koyee tamceel: ya'nee kyaa? :micl, tamceel: to ek hee cheez haiN!
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be-Hijaabaanah nikal aaye wo :IrfaaN: baahar
barq girjaaye nah dekho kahiN gulzaaraoN per
yeh maZ^moon bh`ee ab bohat kahaa jaa chukaa hai. majmoo,e'e t^aur se Ghazal pasand aayee. daad HaaZ^ir hai.
Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"
yooN aur bohat a'ib haiN :Sarwar: meN wa-lekin
kambaKht muHabbat meN to yaktaa nazar aayaa
Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar:
kambaKht muHabbat meN to yaktaa nazar aayaa
Sarwar A. Raz :Sarwar:
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irfan barabankwi
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bahut bahut shukriyah
mohtaramee
SARWAR SAHEB
adab-o-ihtiram
aaj aik taweel muddat ke baAd aapka nawazish namah dekha. bahut khushi hoi. ghazal per aapka tabsirah bahut munasib hai. is tabsirah ki raushni meiN apni ghazal per nazr-e-cani karooNga .
micl unke koi tamceel kahaN se laaooN
(yahaN mera maTlab yeh tha ke unke (yani un rukhsaroN ke baraber ki mical kahaN se laaooN) . ab khayal aaya ke isko yuN bhi kaha jasakta tha ke " unke jaisi koi tamceel kahaN se laaooN ". shayad yeh ziyadah behtar hota.
bahar haal aapke tabriah ka bahut bahut shukriyah. ummeed hai ke ayendah bhi aap apna qeemti waqt nikalkar mujko apni aara se nawazeiNge. shukriayah.
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
SARWAR SAHEB
adab-o-ihtiram
aaj aik taweel muddat ke baAd aapka nawazish namah dekha. bahut khushi hoi. ghazal per aapka tabsirah bahut munasib hai. is tabsirah ki raushni meiN apni ghazal per nazr-e-cani karooNga .
micl unke koi tamceel kahaN se laaooN
(yahaN mera maTlab yeh tha ke unke (yani un rukhsaroN ke baraber ki mical kahaN se laaooN) . ab khayal aaya ke isko yuN bhi kaha jasakta tha ke " unke jaisi koi tamceel kahaN se laaooN ". shayad yeh ziyadah behtar hota.
bahar haal aapke tabriah ka bahut bahut shukriyah. ummeed hai ke ayendah bhi aap apna qeemti waqt nikalkar mujko apni aara se nawazeiNge. shukriayah.
khair andaish
irfan barabankwi
iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
Re: "naazuki khatm hei....": Irfan Barabankwi
Haye kyaa khoob yeh andaaz-e-maseeHaayi hei
Ik nazar Daal gaye aake wo beemaaraoN per
Haal furqat kaa nah ab aap khudaaraa poocheN
yuN samajh leejiye leTaa hooN maiN angaaraoN per
be-hunar saare navaaze gaye eA'zaazaoN se
aur navaazish nahiN koii houi fankaaraoN per
nakhudaa'aoN ne Dubooye the safeene apne
aur ilzaam lagaaye gaye manjdhaaraoN per
micl unke koii tamceel kahaaN se laauN
"naazuki khatm hei un phool se rukhsaaraoN per"
be-Hijaabaanah nikal aaye wo :IrfaaN: baahar
barq girjaaye nah dekho kahiN gulzaaraoN per
wahh bahut umda..bahut khoob...ghazal ke ye ash'aar bahut bhaaye..daad haazir hai Irfan sahab
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