Lafz par Ashaar#2--"MUQADAR"

Post by **syed bilal armaan** » Sat Jan 29, 2005 12:19 pm

pahle main app sab ka shukr ada karounga. app ne mere diye gaye unwan par sher likha . is martaba ka unwan(topic) hai "MUQADAR".
is unwan par bhi app apne pasandida ashar bhejein. (-BILAL)

KUSHK PATHOU'N KA MUQADAR LE KAR
AAG KE SHAHER MEIN RAHTA HOON JANAB

Post by **Shummu** » Sat Jan 29, 2005 3:47 pm

Bahaar Aaye Tou Har Ek Phool Par Ek Saath Aati Hai
Hawa Jin Ka Muqaddar Hoo Woh Shaakhoon Mein Nahien Rehtay

--Amjad Islam Amjad

Post by **Shummu** » Sun Jan 30, 2005 4:06 pm

wah sara jee wah kya sher sunaaya hai!!

'Qateel' apnaa muqaddar Gham se begaanaa agar hotaa
phir to apne-paraaye hamse pehchaane kahaa.N jaate

Post by **jawaid badauni** » Sun Jan 30, 2005 5:31 pm

Kisi aur ka she'r yaad nahiN aa raha hai iss liye majbooran apna hi ek she'r likh raha hooN:

Un safinoN ke muqaddar pe bhaNwar bhi hai udaas
Aa gaye the jo kanaroN pe magar doob gaye

Jawaid badauni
Muscat - Oman

Post by **jawaid badauni** » Mon Jan 31, 2005 7:05 pm

Lijiye ek aur she'r yaad aa gaya, lekin yeh mera nahiN hai:

BahareN aam thiN lekin muqaddar apna apna tha...................

kahiN daman meN phool aaye kahiN daman meN khaar aaye...

Post by **syed bilal armaan** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 9:31 am

har jhil mein pani hai, har ek jhil mein laherein
phir sab ke MUQADAR mein kan'waal kyon nahi hota.

Post by **Shummu** » Tue Feb 01, 2005 4:28 pm

jawaid badauni wrote:Kisi aur ka she'r yaad nahiN aa raha hai iss liye majbooran apna hi ek she'r likh raha hooN:

Un safinoN ke muqaddar pe bhaNwar bhi hai udaas
Aa gaye the jo kanaroN pe magar doob gaye

Jawaid badauni
Muscat - Oman

aapki aamad ka shukriya Jawaid sahab :) bahut khoob sher kaha hai! wah!

Post by **Shummu** » Thu Feb 03, 2005 4:42 pm

musafir ke raste badalte rahe
muqaddar mein chalna tha chalte rahe

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Fri Feb 04, 2005 2:42 am

abhii fil_Haal koii she'r yaad nahiiN aa rahaa gat kaa...is liye, jo yaad aayaa vo raqam kar rahaa huuN:

muqaddar aazmaanaa chaahtaa huuN
tumheN apnaa banaanaa chaahtaa huuN

Post by **Shummu** » Sun Feb 06, 2005 8:44 am

Kyon mera muqaddar hai ujaalon ki siyaahi,
Kyon raat ke dhalne pe saveraa nahi hota.

Post by **najma** » Tue Feb 08, 2005 12:33 am

muqwaddar ki jo sakhtii thii, wo mer ker bhi naheen niklii
lehed khodii gaee merii, to path,thar ki zameen niklii

tabasum · Post by **tabasum** » Tue Feb 08, 2005 2:15 pm

Meri tanha safri mera MUQADAAR thi faraz
warna is sahar-e-tamana se tou duniya guzri hai.

AHMED FARAZ.